Good writing indeed.... It needs lot of efforts to write something like this....

Awwww.... pleasure Manahil... This story is equally close to my heart since its beyond fiction... and is somewhere part of me... Thank you for appreciating it.

Wow... brilliant writing.... I loved it..... Amazing....

Very sensible and practical writing approach.... i liked it....

Last line... a truth.... Liked it....

Great..... thank u

Beautifully expressed.... My super favourite.... Dont have words to describe this poem... speechless.....

Emotions in every word.... every line.... Loved the way you have expressed.... Great poetry.... amazing.....

Thank u so so much dear.... ur comment means a lot to me... thank u once again Manahil....

Thanks a ton.... and thanks for motivating...

Well... u deserve the praise....:)

Such a fab poetry... loved it so much.... So expressive.... wow... Surely my fav....

The comparison drawn is good..... I like the narration....

Great poetry dear.... Goof work....

Its a very cool and funny narration....

Beautiful poem... loved it sooooo much.... Great work ....

Loved it.... great poetry.... well described... words were just perfect....

Thanks a ton Manahil....

What i like the most is the.... agenda behind the story.... well... society needs to get little more liberal.. . Great writing...

I kind of like the plot, and also the way story iz narated.... its good one.... Just with the end i am little confused. .

Wow.... what a great writing.... I liked it way too much.... Very very nyc...

Your story has a good plot... and is written quite well... keep expressing... keep writing

Amazing write up.... so very correct.. Perfect discription.... Double upvotes.

Thanks manahil.... thank u so so much....

Thanks a ton.....

This is such a touchy poem.... as i started reading i could actually feel the agony... Wow.... I am falling short of words.. amazing writing.... Superb

A heartfelt thanks.... well i am not very good at poetry... just tried to express...