Whoahhh im pleasedddd tyyyy

The last line ❤

Buhahaha lol wht is tht supposed to meannnn

Thanyou so much fr ur compliments.. :) :) :) :)

Sure they did but i guess u missed the last point, 'the sky was as inky as i had remembered' it meant tht even tho he was going to be dead it doesnt mean he was forgiven for his sins or tht he was accepted as the skies were still black, some sins r just unforgivable u see.. im sorry i dint made the ending too clear

Sure.. thanku so much for dropping by and sharing the pain :)

Most welcome

Wow its just too besutiful for words.. such simple words and the meaning it holds is very powerful especially the last paragraph. I guess this is ur frst post tht im resding.. and im impressed srsly, so id be reading the rest when i find time.. keep up :-)

Beautiful indeed!

Wow thats srsly a great honour :)

Oh lol hahaha nice one :D

P.s excuse me for not reading ur former posts.. school spares me very seldom. Found time for this one as i had 3 days off for a paper i have on monday :D

Im wowed literally.. seriously need to praise ur beautiful vocabulary.. the fifth para ws beyond beautiful..u inspire me sir :) :)

I hope it adds as something., it did gave me satisfaction when i was done posting :) thanku for reading ^_^

I agree... care to tell me whyd u say ure welcome? P.S thanks for giving me ur tym.. thanx

HIiii been so long. R u back????

Hahaha dint yhink of ghy vishnu :D thanku so mch fr reading

Srslyyyy Me 2222 :(

haha yeah :)

same! ^_^

happpy bdayyyyyy! typotic loves you ;) stay blessed have many more

ah i agree! once u believe in urself, thats the best day of ur life

cant say im back lol.. just trying to catch up still :D tanku for dropping by :P

hola! and LOL! what a rhyme :D amazinggg!

awww real interesting loved it <3

nice try!

interesting!!!!! haha sure is funny!