loved the endinggg.. keep up =D

aww is it all fictional btw?? was just wondering :P

hmm got me thinking.. nice one

aww so deep :/

hehe the best part is tat u made me read the poem twice cos i couldnt make it out.. definitely deserves an up vote lolol xD

good oneee :D

lol as u pleasseeee.. xD

yeah you should feel bad cruella *teary eyed :'D P.s: dont stoppppp.. thats what my profile pic says :p

wooowww.. so this was kinda true o.O

hahah i can c tat... good thng ^-^

and loveeddd the cover image ^-^

whoa wow o.O such beautiful words.. im awed rly :D

i completely agree with manelyn.. some minimal grammar probs but still u instilled loads of emotion in it :D keep up

so beautifuull and touchiingg.. loving it.. P.s: havent seen u in a long while.. its me manahil naik.. just changed my username :P

wonderfullll... keep it up hobbit!! :P lord of the rings fan eh?? :D

uhm well according to me, rhyming doesnt matter much.. u just have to instill the feels and emotions.. even though all of my poems rhymes, there still are amazing writers out here who have poems that doesnt rhyme much.. "kid's" is an example.. its the latest by abbycallan and id rly recommend it for inspiration :) Aww so cutee... whats her name? :P

this was sooo cool o.O... loved the ending :D P.s: dont consider i'm returning the pleasure or smthng.. i meeannnn itt :).. btw just wondering how old is ur daughter? :P

agreed :D

nyc lesson :)

shoottt.. aww :(

aww most welcome :P.. its manahil naik here btw :D

haha i just click on the faves and i hope that says it all... how can i nottt love ittt?? :P

omg hahahah this is soo adorableee... well done :D im sure theyll love ittt

lol xD

gee ure poems just race my mind and so fast i swear.. the best xD

thrilling... o.O next part???

awesome =)