Footsteps

by hobbit2530
I don't know how I lost my soul
Nor why my blood dried in a bowl
Strange how absolute the silence screamed
When your body left me in my dream.

When I think of myself
I realized how flat a life mine has been
Like a planted seed,but none have taken
The farmer ignored the raven,his face was ashen ,heart barren.

Though I long for an imaginary world
In which to live again
A thief swift as thunder
Cut the strings of pearls
Fear placed on my shoulders.

I explored between the folds of difficult choices
But I heard unfamiliar voices
For a confused wisdom it opened the gates of suspicion
I fought temptation's insolence with passion.

I gathered the frozen crust of tears
And offered a sacrifice to split the spears
Behind the footsteps of sympathy to the door of destiny
Your radiant smile transformed me into a ray of glory.
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rekhanshiraghava

rekhanshiraghava

July 30, 2015 - 09:15 Brilliant writing.....
hobbit2530

hobbit2530

July 30, 2015 - 10:42 thank you Ms.Rekhan :)
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Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

July 30, 2015 - 10:48 wonderfullll... keep it up hobbit!! :P lord of the rings fan eh?? :D
samewriter

samewriter

July 30, 2015 - 11:14 aight, this is good :D keep up buddy!
abbywookie

abbywookie

July 30, 2015 - 14:28 Loved this! :)
hobbit2530

hobbit2530

July 30, 2015 - 14:53 loads of Thanks to all.yup I am a huge fan of L O T R:)
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 30, 2015 - 14:57 Beautiful with such descriptive emotions. Totally fascinating :)

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