Finally!

by Black Rose
This patient wait that has befallen on me
It is not something you can clearly see
But this beating is of a different tune
It reminds me of the purity of the moon.

There is nothing perfect from my dreams
But life is never what it seems
I have never imagined there was a hole
Until you took a peek into my soul

You have revived something that I thought I lost
The ability to love with a heart encrusted in frost
I waited so long for this moment
To find this missing exponent

Lead me to your world of surprise
Envelope me in all the words of the wise
Love me with every drop of essence that is inside
And watch my feelings faithfully abide

Flaws and fault
Nothing will make you halt
I surrender without a fight
There is something magnetic about this plight

I have waited years for this woe
But I never gave up hope on you
That one day my heart will do
Something beautiful and love someone like you.
Let others and the author know if you liked it

Liked it alot?
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

July 30, 2015 - 13:03 so beautifuull and touchiingg.. loving it.. P.s: havent seen u in a long while.. its me manahil naik.. just changed my username :P
Black Rose

Black Rose

July 30, 2015 - 13:07 i lost my inspiration for a while, but he came and found me :) Looking forward to writing again :D
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

July 30, 2015 - 13:10 wooowww.. so this was kinda true o.O
abbywookie

abbywookie

July 30, 2015 - 13:46 romeo leornadoooooooooooooooo :D
Black Rose

Black Rose

July 30, 2015 - 13:55 its not past tense, its present tense. it is true every single syllable is dripping with maddening Love. lol im love sick and theres nothing i can do about it, besides write about it ;)
rekhanshiraghava

rekhanshiraghava

July 31, 2015 - 10:17 Touching.... every single line ... every single word.. speaks d volume. Superb writing...
Black Rose

Black Rose

July 31, 2015 - 16:45 Thank you very much :)
chizoba

chizoba

August 16, 2015 - 15:58 fantastic black rose.I hope this love of yours last a lifetime and I hope to find mine too.check out my poems.
Ds

Ds

October 24, 2015 - 09:34 I like the image of a heart encrusted in frost. This is a really beautiful poem.

More from Black Rose

Stuck to you

Stuck to you
by Black Rose

My current Addiction My constant High

Chance.

Chance.
by Black Rose

I close my eyes and think of you,
You feel part of my heart beat and breath too.
I've been on this road before,...

My Letter to YOU!

My Letter to YOU!
by Black Rose

We all have that specific guy/girl that we need to stand up to in life, the one that you assume is a friend, and the one that you think understands you. We are blinded by our feelings towards them that we don’t clearly see that they are pulling...

Can't get enough of you

Can't get enough of you
by Black Rose

How he mixes my words. The irony of loving writing and and your one true love leaving you speechless! Speechless and bound by his love to be his loving slave until eternity. Hahahahaha his driving me crazy :)

Unexpected Completion

Unexpected Completion
by Black Rose

Someone who I never thought would complete me, has magnetised my soul to his.............................. I wonder, is this finally true LOVE? Because even just thinking about him, completes me!

Words from the heart

Words from the heart
by Black Rose

How it all came to be