Beautifull!! So sweet. Nicely done, mate :D

Your very welcome and thanks :D

It's pretty Deep and I like that :D Good job :D

So deep and you have squeezed the whole worlds feelings into a single para. Great job. :D

Oh, really well written, keep it up, Abby :D

Oh okie, I will leave it to the #themysteryofcarmilasrealname ;)

Thx for the upvote on the binary stars :D

Your very welcome :D

She is screaming in pain, silently. Gah!! I love it. :D

Your very welcome :D Ooh, you kinda got the whole community wondering about your carmila or not name ;D

Thx a lot for the upvote on tell him :D

Your very welcome :D

A bit confusing like who's talking to who but over all I like the general idea, there's a plot. :) A Little work on your dialogs and everything would be good. Keep it up. Hope to read more from you :D

Aww, thanks a lot again :)

Sad and beautiful. :D

Oh god!! This is so relatable and sweet!!! Carmila or not, you did a great job :D

Thank youuuu so much again!! For the upvote on binary stars :D Glad to hear from you. :)

Your welcomest!! ;D

Really interesting. Keep it up :D

Nicely done here:D

Sweet :3

Beautiful, me love it :D

Nicely written :D

Peace sign ~

Aww. Still you did a great job.:D When I need rhymes I sometimes check out rhymezone. Just type a word and one can get so many rhymes :D

Your very welcome ^_~

Your very welcome, mate. U_U