Good story, but so sad,i feel for Chance, so touching..

Thank you Dravench for appreciating my poem.. ;-)

Good piece, a good writer is a creator who uses the pen to bring new worlds alive.. the virtual make believe world// blessings

good write.. keep smiling stay happy live forever

Thank you Velantra.. for those comments, am honoured by your kind words

David thanks for the visit.. as for Jack he departed to the lands beyond where his tales are reborn ;-)

Purpletears...i like this story, let her enjoy life, let her enjoy her glass of wine, for tomorrow has loads of worries

an interesting love story, i like the way you explore the emotions in the story ;-)

Thank you Velantra

Thank you Velantra, and love is the most beautiful of emotions.. .. they say love makes the world go round ;-)

An emotive piece on the very controversial topic of attempted suicide.. nicely written..

Thank you Dhaye..

A beautiful poem..

great piece.. a dreamer will dream again and again.. for in dreaming the vision is actualized..

Purpletears.. a excellent piece beautifully composed

Lorenzo...wonderfully woven piece.. and delivered so effotlessly

this is an awesome piece David.. the good book says.."What is man oh Lord and the son of Man whilst yo made him a little lower than the angels you crowned him with dominion over all your works"...... and another verse "you are gods today i have begotten you"

Dhaye.. great poem you have penned here

This is an excellent piece of work.. the muse of poetry must have pitched camp near you..

Dhaye.. This is a great write, with emotions depicted vividly

..true love of mine your all i need... so romantic excellent piece

A lovely romantic write

All i can say is.. am thrilled

Stalkers give me the creeps.. nice story i love the plot

Rekhan...wonderfully composed, with the emotions delivered so vividly one feels them..

a well penned romantic piece

Thanks Velantra..glad you enjoyed