My Waitress

by davidehrgott
She's a great big lover
Like an Oregon bear
and I love her little uniform
my waitress

Let's go into the forest
and play
way way into the forest
let's play

and she has the prettiest face
that is what - the first thing I saw
her pretty face

sing my love
like the red birds
flying with the yellow
white and blue birds

so tender in their loving
sing my love
sing
sing my waitress
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LUIS KAY

LUIS KAY

January 8, 2016 - 10:02 a well penned romantic piece
Dhaye

Dhaye

January 15, 2016 - 10:38 I have read this already but not yet given my comment because of my limited time. I go back to this piece to give my review/comment. Third verse: there is one thing that caught your attention to that waitress- it is her pretty face. There is truth in this piece that I admire. Most people actually first attracted with a beautiful face and/or body before anything else. Then after some meetings or dates, you will be attracted to the the attitude, not anymore to the physical attributes of the person. Nice one! I think you are also at HP, David. Happy writing here at typotic.
davidehrgott

davidehrgott

January 28, 2016 - 17:48 Yes, I am at HP if you give me your username there I will follow.

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