Silly. But powerful! Lol.

Have a good year D!

Like seriously . . . I would buy my partner a book for her Valentine's day. I don't want to spoil her with gifts like jewellery, gadgets and even chocolates. I don't have one now though, but if I do, she'll be a reader.

Thank you for your precious time reading this S. Have a good day.

You too. Have a great year ahead S and wish u endless success!

Sorry for the late reply S. Thanks for your time. Kind of busy lately and yesterday tried to log in but internet was problematic.Not sure if I'll be writing much this month. Will see.

Yes. I think it's kind of sad to leave the year. A year just passed so fast. Thanks for your time reading this D. Appreciate it.

Yes, got it right there Gary. Thumbs up! =)

Reality of our world now. Human needs to treat other human as HUMAN. This is very sad. I'm tired of all this wars and genocide. This is a wonderful post.

Thank you Sir David. I've just re-read this post and found some errors. My bad not checking thoroughly. Thank you for your up vote and kindest comment.

I enjoyed it! Is this the end?

Yep we all do, loving all your poems and stories, they're all eyes and mind opening! Same here, I checked my recent and old posts for spelling and grammar errors as well. My grammar is so bad and I'm lacking of vocabs. Need more practices.

Amazing! You could've been a great author!

Omg! Why would you do that to her?? Poor Cindy.

I hope so!

Thanks Sharmy. Still much more to learn.

Beautifully written. Love it. =)

Lake is some sort of a pervert. That's way too straight forward for him to say things like that! Good chapter.

yay!

Why so short? Make it at least 400 to 600 words. Still love it though!

This story starting out great but why so short? I love it anyway!

Holy sh**. Pedophilia is definitely not okay! Sometimes corrupted people are misusing religious activity for things like this. And I hear it quiet often in the news. Very sad!

Life is harshed. It doesn't always have hollywood ending. I can imagine "what if" my self being in this situation. It hurts. Painful.

Thanks Dahmie.

I don't know why but when I see the title "Where's My Pen?" It reminds me to that weird song PPAP (Pen Pineapple Apple Pen). I'm literally crying right now. Lol.

I think your story is just way too sudden. When writing a fantasy story, you need a very powerful introduction. That attracts reader's attention. There is too much uncessasary description (I easily lost interest with dragging introduction). What you lack is world building. You need to work on that more. Am not saying your story isn't good, you have a good storyline (i like the character Sky). You're lacking the "umph". This is an honest comment from me. But apart from that, your grammar is perfection.

Very true.