beautiful and sad

yap...it also makes me sad dhaye...Thanks for reading it.

thanks ashutoshparmar!

thanks hazel.actual im thinking of what you said to me earlier while im writing this story. so herd i write again and im glad you like it too.

thanks david!

you should on to your dreams no matter what...

thanks! i relly appreciate your effort to read thru my poem

I love it!percect story and well-written

nothing...just insanity or the facr that the murderer had split personality

true!!

nice knowing you too hazel

thanks stomachfull...clever of you to say that..true...a little of it reflects my emotion

Big thanks! It is an honor to hear a comment from you.

I like your poem.it's tragic..

many thanks for your appeeciation. .Im from Philippines

Love it! I too wears a mask...and right. .everyobe does...clever poem!

Im sure of that.!

I like your poem...it simply said one thing...God loves us..and I believe in Him...wonderful!

Sweet and vivid...Im sure many could relate to your poem...

actually it means there are instance that you have to be totally wicked even if it means hurting youf friends to be on top..sorry for ths phrase.its typographical error.it simply goes this way...but what if it's what the situation requires...but thanks for your comment.it helps a lot...

Thanks! you can count on it...

Thanks hazel...I appreciate your effort to read my story....not all..I also wrote commentary articles or not so sweet.check my wixked poem...that's another different genre.

hey guys wadtch out for part 2!!