Broken

by Lea Ebio
I let go! Now it's finally over
I can't believe it finally comes to an end
I suffered a lot...
cried a lot...
and now I cannot shed a tear anymore
You fooled me over and over
til my trust is broken
And now my faith is all in shambles
hear my heart..it crumbles...

I'm broken all in pieces
Deceive by your sweet nothings and kisses
But where are you now? I wonder
My jealous heart begins to ponder
It's beenso long since the last timeI saw you
And this emptiness makes me wanna let go...
Time is my company
and yet still my enemy...
My mind cease to think
maybe someday my heart will also stop to beat
maybe I will be frozen here with time
when he will someday come back to me...
Yet I don't know if I could feel that way again
feel the warmth of love and joy
because here I am hurting...
and already broken.
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DavidBokolo

DavidBokolo

September 3, 2015 - 16:09 Sometimes it pays to let go, but there must a reason why, from the other end. nice piece E.
Lea Ebio

Lea Ebio

September 3, 2015 - 16:14 Big thanks! It is an honor to hear a comment from you.
stomachfull

stomachfull

September 3, 2015 - 19:26 there are very nice dynamics in this poem! I can't find the right word, but there is something about it - truth? sincerity? - that makes it very interesting to read. Maybe a very truthful honesty with yourself about how you feel? It seems as if the poem bears wittnes to some humbling acceptance that is starting to emerge - would you say it is in any way involved in how you feel? thanks!
Lea Ebio

Lea Ebio

September 4, 2015 - 01:46 thanks stomachfull...clever of you to say that..true...a little of it reflects my emotion
FlynnMarhu

FlynnMarhu

September 28, 2015 - 10:48 This poem is simple yet amazing.Thanks for sharing !! :)
Lea Ebio

Lea Ebio

September 28, 2015 - 11:06 thanks flynn
Jefrizza

Jefrizza

October 1, 2015 - 06:04 It makes me feel like 'letting go' is actually a great choice.
Lea Ebio

Lea Ebio

October 1, 2015 - 06:58 yeah sometimes it is..thanks jefrizza

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