ur most welcome David. You always write intelligent piece and some of which I can, and even others can relate. I hope things would someday get better for both our country

i like this...the harsh truth of thd present times, even in my own country poverty is abundant and everybody, including me is struggling to make a living

sad but beautiful ....great piece and poignant.. i love the way you write

nice work! I could feel your loneliness there...you write it so well my friend

Queer...I don't know also know what that means. Maybe a future bigger task you should be readying yourself from now? It seems like a message to prepare you for something????

thankz David. Honestly, I still haven't thought about it...maybe history will repeat itself?one-sided love or letting go...hmmm..i still don't know..and thanks for the upvote David!

thanks a lot Velantra. Your comment means a lot to me.

intelligent work! you provide facts and it helps a lot knowing that when reading your post, we will not read on just theories but helpful info as well. Although, being a true Christian, I strongly believe in God...and cimpletely disagree with the belief that 'religion' is just used to manipulate. Yet, everyone is entitled to their own opinion..right?

ok..I will

same here sharm!your comments mean a lot!

thanks sharm! and thankz for the upvote!

yeah....who could really blame someone for following their heart's desire? nice strong poem..

you really are one of the excellent writers in this forum! I enjoyed reading your posts especially "happiness"... keep writing!

nice work Velantra! You made it sound dark and intriguing indeed and fascinating..plus, I like the way you rhymed it..keep it up friend

what an exciting twist! an extraordinary fb story. You should also post this to your fb account. This would somehow be viral. I love this!

Great job! I always admire how you compose your dark poem. It rhymes and scares at thesame time... Love to read more

good job at portraying your character's difference between the first story and the second. I could feel the emotions of your "hero" as I read his journal. Such solitude can also drives us insane. Btw...if you want to work and cooperate with the writers here ...avoid blasphemy and act nicely. I've read your greetings in the chatroom. Have fun writing!

lovely view indeed!

another unique piece! well-done sortof..btw- was Greg human or bird? I'm still guessing...you describe him like a human but the girl made him actually sound like a pet.

I apologize for that..,

I think you're right sharm

yeah right velantra...btw..thanks for reading!

yeah david, we will!

thanks rekhan!that was such huge compliment

right David..trust is very important

very many thanks velantra

thanks joy..i'd consider it as a compliment