wow really? I actually finished my senior year here so I picked up a few more slang words. LOL don't worry I sound funny when I speak tagalog too. I sound tougher when I type it. LOL mas magaling ako pag online tapos walang maka rinig sa akin mag salita :)

Oh gosh wow HAH I know I'm being mean but... lemme talk to your girl character real quick. SERVES YOU RIGHT!! MUAHAHA girl you LEARNED your lesson. And a message for the author: Thank you so much for writing this :) It truly is beautifully heartbreaking.

Awww Same here. I can speak (A little) and I can understand, but yeah the accent is a bit wow. LOL I LITERALLY tried to learn this language while growing up because I was born in that country. I love it there! SO proud to be Philippines-born :D EEEK If you could speak we could maybe practice on each other :D yay

WOW short but very meaningful :) Keep writing!

GASP so you speak Tagalog?

Um.. Philippines? WE LOVE YOU TOOOO!!!!

This is so good! The part where he fixed his watch and finding joy in doing it tugged at my heart strings. Thank you for posting this and being honest!!

sigh. You're so evil. Keeping so many secrets... EVEN YOUR OWN COUNTRY! GASP. Come on! Spit it out already! (I meant the story but you could say the same for your country too.)

ohhhh I get it now. You're from Vegas! WASSSUUP??

Wait I meant bonjour :)

YOU'RE FROM PARIS?! WOW! HOLA!

OH MY GOD BAD GUY!!! BAD BAD BAD BAD BAD MAN! And as for YOU oh author! You need to explain to me why I get SO emotionally attached to this story. HUH??! Why am I screaming?! Why?! WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD?!

Hahaha bloody amazing then? ;P just kidding. And thank you for this!

Hahaha yeah I thought so too after I myself read it. Men CAN sew :P jkjk thank you!!

Hahaha! Thank you! Lol you're awesome :)

I HATE how racist the world was back then... grrrr.... fantastic story by the way! keep at it!

OH MY GORGEOUS! PLOOOOOT TWWIIIIISSTTT!!!!! HAHAHAHAILOVEITHHAHAHA! THis is mind-boggling and you wrote it flawlessly and I enjoyed every word it was too awesome not too and when I read the end I practically screamed and ran around the house cos I did not expect THAT so yeah :D I actually thought about this story when I was younger but I never really did get to to tell it as good as you did. GREAT JOB!!

Oh wow what a tragic ending. It's so sad though! Why would that man just kill such a happy girl? Urgh lol wow this poem gave me goosebumps. Keep it going!! This is sooooo good! I really love poems...especially this one.

Ugh you don't have to ask I am DEFINITELY leaving a comment girl :P This story is so true about many people...heartbreak isn't easy. Especially when you see that person not being as affected as you... All in all it is a fantastic story, and very well-written. Please do some more!

Thank you!! She realized the world was better when she met me ;P haha just kidding. Thank you again for taking time to comment on my story :) You made my day :D

Very true the world still has some good in it :) my friend came to realize that soon as well. I'm glad she did. Thank you for your feedback! :D

I'm from the Philippines :) but I grew up around the world :D

Three words. OH MY GOODNESS. I absolutely love poems and this one just described my situation almost perfectly! Seriously pop artists NEED to make a song out of this. This poem is perfection my friend. PLEASE DO SOME MORE! It's super deep too. AWESHUM

DAAAANG this is good! I'm a sucker for poems too! It's pretty cool how you use nature and earth itself to represent something unseen. It's really deep. Please write some more!! I didn't follow you for nothing :P

Hello! Thank you! And it's my best friend's story :) She was blind since birth and her story has inspired me so much :D Now I want the world to be a better place for when my children first open their eyes.

This was really good!!! So she has a thing for people in uniforms and right after her husband died she catches another person and finds him attractive. CLIFFHANGER!!!! You did wonderful in weaving this plot and I encourage you to make some more stories!! Also, I'm new to this so could you please read my story? It's nowhere as good as yours, but I tried haha! Thanks again for this sad but beautiful story :)