It a lot of concentration to make meaning of the things ahead you. Thanks, M. Long time no hear.

Hello V. thanks for getting to this one. I'll be back soon. I am on a writing Research. I' missing the forum, though.

Oh, John D, Thanks for taken me down memory lane, and your encouragement motivates me to want to write more, like the books we were reading.

I love the plotting of this story. Very detailed and you never left out the thought and feelings. Sound very realistic. Good writing ,V. I am paying attention to the story now, not just reading it.

That's how I felt in my Heart. Thanks for being inspired and for the upvote, D.

Thanks, Luis K, we are in the same page.

Nice Piece, Rose. however,once in a while, we need to put our heads on someone's shoulder to weep. W e maytake their counselling then.

Last Saturday, I went out on a child naming ceremony of one of our sisters in the church. while we were praying, I saw what wonders God hath done. That brought out this poem. It was from the depth of my heart, V. I'm happy that you appreciates it.

I am weaving the story together, and I can now follow it, V. Nice going. Can't help wondering, if a writer is not the sanest person then who is?

I have lived in the poetic environment on this platform for some time, that's why I'm feeling your piece so. So poetic. Nice work, Naik.

In everything there is one moment to cherish. I love this your little piece,P.

You knew why you are welcome, and you've given the reasons on my page. No harm done???

Thank you, Naik. I'm grateful to get into this piece into your feelings.

See, Those papers are your passport for your. Though we missed you seriously on this platform. Thank you Naik.

Their evils are still riding our shores. We wake every morning to news of burnt out Children even in this generation. You're welcome NaiK

D, I thank you for digging this out. You've just drawn me back to him. Thanks.

Hi, Soma, I love this poem. It got me almost turning.

He's made all thing for a purpose, and I think He is refining us to become a better people that will acknowledge Him. Though it's painful, we give all glory to Him. Thank you Ejay, for stopping by to reason with me.

Thank you, V.

Very soft story. I wasn't expecting the implied violence in the end, though.

Thank you Velantra, for you upvote and positive attitude about us. I 'll begin to look at the brighter side of things here.

Velantra, this almost put me in tears. Thanks for your feeling. It's from the bottom of the concerned heart. I'll share it on my FB page and twitter.

I love the tone of this piece, though not the body of the poem. I like this, L

Thank you, V. for stopping by to give an upvote and encouragement. We just have to do what we considered as right thing.

Thanks, Ejay, it sounds as a pillar to lean on, your comment.

It's Okay. I'm impressed with the presentation.

As candid as candid could be.Thanks Velantra