Thanks Vishnumayaa...I guess a grin gives our teeth away :D I appreciate the up-vote and wish u the best too ;)

Aaw Rekhanshiraghava :)...that's really sweet of u to say. I'm grateful you for the claps... & the up-vote too :)

Lol...I really had to scratch my head this time round. Looking forward to read from you my favorite poet. Thanks for the up vote!

I love the message...choosing who to bury & who let wander in the beautiful world. Descriptively nice. Keep it up!

Yes Manahil...it was all fictional except that grass not growing before President Obama's arrival was a real concern! Lol! Thanks for up voting :)

Thank uuuu abbycallan :D & thank you so much for your support during the contest coz u contributed to my winning!

Thank you PenFairy...it is through your support that I got there. Be blessed!

Thank you for your support manahil. I really appreciate.

This is teary...I want to cry with her, I can almost feel her emotions. Great writing skills :)

Hey, why did you stop? I want to read more of this :) . It is captivating and well written!

Sad story that relates to many writers.I however feel it needed a little proof reading to correct a few errors. Good work though :)

Hahaa. I did Part 2 and thought I should pull it down (effects of writing on a boring day :)). Sometimes I think I should redeem myself by redoing it :D

Thanks for reading & for the compliment PenFairy. Thanks for the up vote too!! It means a lot to me :)

Love your style of writing. so interesting :)

Looking forward to it :)

Awww...beautiful poem.

Tragic. Good to read the flowing conversation.

Thanks Mohobee for the up vote! It means a lot to me :)

I got mixed feelings here... you are a good writer.

interesting story...let me check out part 2 :)

Sad story. Your write beautifully and I love reading your work. Keep it up!

Cute! Glad Ian fought for Yani.

So sad a story...I hope Lisa wasn't your first love. I can almost touch the emotion in the story.

haha sheelsdevi: I know...it's realistic fiction remember and I couldn't help it :)

Oh this is sooo beautiful! I like the creativity!

Good story but the end is too abrupt. I feel you still had over 45o words to expound a little more...good work though.

I like your story. Interestingly good :)