That night when the stars crashed up together in the sky
Down below, Crash! Crash! The sea was raging, the tides were high
The stars were bruised and crying...
I tried to find myself
First
In the lighter hues of life...
A happy new year to yalll... :D :D <3 make ur wishes, set your aims, achieve them with big strong hearts and yeah, stick to ur resolutions indeed :)
A tribute to my favourite personalities in the world, the ones who witnessed the most cruel day, 16 of December, attack on peshawar pakistan's army public school..
The broken highway of distressed brains and deep ditchesNeedle shrubs on either sidesWalks the abysmal souls reigned by sorrowsAnd the souls vacant,Of hopes of moonlit seas and pretty tomorrow*The broken highway laden,With corpses of spring...
11 COMMENTS
DavidBokolo
January 2, 2017 - 20:07 This is beautiful, Naik. I wonder what will happen to her at the end of 365 days. Hope she won't be stained.Manahill Naik
January 2, 2017 - 21:56 Thankyou. Too bad she's already stained. The world is at war :(Sharmishtha Shenoy
January 3, 2017 - 07:35 Mind blowing poem Manahill . Absolutely loved itManahill Naik
January 3, 2017 - 12:03 Means so much. Thnku for making me believe in myself. Owe u all a lotrekhanshiraghava
January 4, 2017 - 18:04 i am totally in love with what you write, and this one is exceptionally beautiful.... wow.... loved it....Manahill Naik
January 20, 2017 - 11:07 Omg ure aliveeeee thnkuuuuu yarrrrrr ab rulao gy kiaabbywookie
January 5, 2017 - 03:36 beautiful =] but what's it about? i feel like there's this deep message behind it btw quick ques. im considerin 'garden of words'. is it worth the watch?Manahill Naik
January 20, 2017 - 11:06 Its peace. I mean "her" is peace ifukwimNd welllll yea. Its good but but but hmm lets see, try the girl who leapt thru time frst. Thts a 100% Btw, it felt good how u realized theres a deep message behind it.
PenFairy
January 6, 2017 - 04:04 The way you structure your writing and the words chosen never cease to make me fall in love with it! Good work dear <3Manahill Naik
January 20, 2017 - 11:07 A gazillion thankyouspies11
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