Ah thanks for the up vote.

Thanks, sorry for replying so late. Busy with house and home. I honestly appreciate your comments.

Thanks my friend and thanks for the up votes. Hope you are doing better. Xxx

Thanks, and thank you for the up vote

This is beautiful David. Did you write it? Or is it from another source?

Not even Einstein was..... Hehehe Thanks for the up vote.

We have this joke "if you don't understand" something, we say you are blond. (Blond hair) girls with blond hair tend to be stupid. Buhahaha And I have blond hair, so I use it as an excuse. Do you know the joke about the blond who was staring at her microwave? She was waiting for the television to come on. The blond buys a dress with her new credit card. She writes her pin number on the slip. The lady behind the counter ask: "Why do you do that? " Says the blond: "well, how will you get the money out of my card if you don't know my pin number?"

Sure, will do, so write a story about the dreams you want to live in.......

hehehe, thanks my friend. I am glad you enjoy it. It keeps me sane, at the moment...... :-)

I'm blond........ :-)

tooooooo much work, washing, cleaning, cooking.......blah, blah, blah. I'm depressed and tired.....

Hey friend, if you feel like jumping of a bridge, not without me.....I know what you feel like. I'm so tired my friend, even my house is falling apart around me. I don't have the energy to bother anymore.

I enjoy it when I can see every word I read in my minds eye. That is what writing is all about. I am glad they finally came for him. I could feel the poor mans agony. good one Manahil

I'm lost for words, but I know, it already makes a difference just because we write about it. Other people see it, and react to it.

Thanks, we saw the footage on television. You once wrote, you put yourself in the orher persons shoes, when you write. I did that, it's so sad. I was crying.

Don't think Dhaye, is a grandma she looks pretty young en beautiful to me.

Good, will do. Let you know. :-)

Sorry for me they sound good

Honesty, my friend. That's all. Doesn't help if we just write rubbish to make some one feel good. We are here for support and honesty as well. I struggle with poems. Don't know all that funny names. Trying my best when I have time to read up on them. I just know something must rhyme, so most of the time, I just say free verse. Hehehee. But for they sound good. :-?

Hope you feel better. I don't have the energy for anything. I'm tired and I need a holiday.

Thanks, I had to make a whole caracter setup with dates and years. Even I couldn't keep tract. Hehehe It is Circles in circles of complications and deceit. You cannot imagine what I have in mind for this story. Tank you for reading and the up votes

It it a very good poem Lorenzo. You write from your heart. Not fiction.

Glad you feel better now. Mean, mean, guy.

It is a good piece. Well written. Curious about the next part. It kept me captivated, I could see the caracters in my mind, that is what is important.

That's sad. Thanks for all the upvotes :-)

Hmmmm, that was mentioned in Part 1 already. But why did she do it? A lot of pieces, "might be" I don't say that it is; is connected to real life events.

It is difficult, I know. We also have our problems, but not at that scale or fear. It is inhumanity and terrible, If you are not there, you cannot comprehend what fear a person go through.