Thank you, thank you for the upvotes x

beautiful and sad..... I like the way you wrote it. I don't know much about writing poems, but I am learning a lot here. This is a new and fresh learning experience for me, Thank you Dhaye and thanks for the up votes on my stories. I am definitely going to try writing a poem in this style xx

The one with the tormented soul? any one you want her to be.... :-)

lovely, dhaye, it is very comforting as well.....

Oh, I understand. Thanks for the reply. and thank you for the up vote on my story. I am busy with part 3 x

Thank you very much, I appreciate it. I am always scared that I will overdue, the way a character is feeling.

That is a good reason, rather than she also committed suicide, so to succumb to weather elements is way better. Another reason that could be nice, is if her old boyfriend Greg, killed her......

Very good writing indeed. great story, even if it freaks me out of my skin!!!!!! :-) I'm hiding all my kitchen knives NOW!!!!!!!!!!

Did she also jump? or did the old boyfriend kill her? I'm just trying to think what went through your mind? You have written it well. I could see it all happening in front of me and i think, that is what writing is about.......A+

How do we up vote a post? just by reading it? if you add it to your favourites list? or if we click the little hand? sorry for asking..... do not laugh........ i told you, I will haunt you...... and b.t.w sorry to veil of midnight "not a he....."

Thank you, and thanks for the up vote and adding it to your favourites list.....

Very beautiful, I read it three times. (I am blond, do not have a clue what it is about......and if you laugh....... I will send a virus to your computer.......hahahahaha)

How about telling what happened in the sanatorium?

For a start, I thought it was a guy in the beginning...... hahahaha...... but YES, YOU GOT ME!!!!!! I want to read more, for sure!!!!!

You are a guy? Just asking? If you don't mind.......just to be sure? :-)(???

You are so weird, that I actually enjoy your work. :-) Weird or not, it is good.....

Congratulations on your third place!!!!!!!!!

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Beautiful Dhaye, what happened to: Love is a mystery? did you delete it?

Thanks Joy, it is true, !!!!!!!!!!this is the only place where I find inspiration AT ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is great girl!!!!!!! and true, so true!!!!!!!! i am also scared to write poems. You did a great job! Be proud....x

I just new from the start where you were going with this. It is such a different angle, from how people usually write stories like this. I love it!!!

I don't know if this is just a poem or meant for some one, but as a woman I know what it feels like when other women look down on you, I can't imagine what a man must feel like.

Thank you very much and thank you for the up vote

I am glad if all the coughing subsided, I duno if you live, in a cold place, keep her inside. there is enough sadness in the world, we need people who care.....xx00xx

thanks a lot, I appreciate it sooooooooooooo much, and thank you for the up vote!!!!