Glad you liked it..
Wow... My heart aches, and my tears almost fall. So I'm very relieved when I read the last part. God, that almost gave me a heart attack! But seriously, its a job well done. I really enjoyed the way you wrote the words and translate in a verse, and make it a story... I'm very impressed, indeed...
Hmm.. really? I guess so:-)
Thanks! I'm grateful that you liked it.
Wow! That took my breath away. You're good! Nice job!
Nice insight. That help a lot. Thanks:-)
I hope so too...
Thank you:-) I'm grateful tat you like it!
Huh? I knew that there's something wrong with the kid, coz he's more mature than anyone gave credit for, but I can't believed you wrote it like this.. But seriously its good. The flow of the story is written in a very nice manner, giving your reader a very entertaining piece. Good job!