Huh? I knew that there's something wrong with the kid, coz he's more mature than anyone gave credit for, but I can't believed you wrote it like this.. But seriously its good. The flow of the story is written in a very nice manner, giving your reader a very entertaining piece. Good job!

Wait? Jacob is Lily? I don't understand. I mean the plot is nice, but I can't tell that Lily is Jacob's past. His did that happened?

Just finished reading it.. Its pretty good, though I don't know why others don't like the ending, coz for me its the best part. And actually no joke, but that time when Mrs. Cooper said she already died gives me the chill... Oh man, that was so scary!

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Glad you liked it..

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Wow... My heart aches, and my tears almost fall. So I'm very relieved when I read the last part. God, that almost gave me a heart attack! But seriously, its a job well done. I really enjoyed the way you wrote the words and translate in a verse, and make it a story... I'm very impressed, indeed...

Oh my God.... Please don't tell me this is from real experience co'z that's really terrifying. I knew that I have some issues with guys but not this extreme. So please tell me, is this the truth?

I understand.. sometimes our fears varies but either way, we see the world in same ways. We might deny it. We might turn a blind eye. But within us, we knew. That we are afraid in same things...

Hmm.. really? I guess so:-)

Thanks! I'm grateful that you liked it.

Yeah, kind of. After reading the team in this competition that thought just came over to me.. oh well, thanks for the vote, by the way!

Wow! That took my breath away. You're good! Nice job!

Kinda weird sort of fear, but cute nonetheless.. And I know what you mean, co'z sometimes I feel that too..:-)

That's deep. I know that fear is always dark and taunting, but the way you unravel it by your words, just let me realize how terrifying it really is...

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Its a good one. You wrote it in a natural flow. I kinda like it, such a shame that its not related to the theme for the competition... But its really nicely done! Keep up the good work!

Nice insight. That help a lot. Thanks:-)

I hope so too...

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Thank you:-) I'm grateful tat you like it!

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