nice attempt innoalifa.. keep going :)

whats with the cover image :P

but it should be single f i guess

aww its alrite.. ill try my best.. i have some friends here you know

yeah its rather hard for me to be impressed by others and you really managed doing tht.. lol :D

cos everytime I search for you i see 8 short stories though i expect for more :D

manelyn im really looking forward for more form you. when are you gonna write?? :P

really nice innoalifa :)

great work mahrukh.. really nice :)

hmm.. you should try avoiding that. :D

Appreciated as always vishnumayaa :)

good! I like it.. :) keep going..

youre doing a good job vishnumayaa. but try concentrating on your spellings.. and the writing format.. :)

try working hard on your spellings shazia.. keep up

weird :)

i cant help laughing!!! lol

my pleasure :)

aww 1d would die when the see this picture lol :P

sure thing :)

wow super interesting.. ill look forward to more

really nice.. keep on writing

youre vocabulary and spellings are very weak.. try concentrating on that. cos pain is spelled PAIN not pin and theres nothing in this world which is spelled as stachu its spelled STATUE.. be careful about these things.. youll do better :)

youre commenting yourself?? :D

My pleasure.. keep on smashing :)

nice start shazia :)

love it :)

Great work.. a really new concept and by the way the end was good i mean it shud have been a dream or else it would be pretty weird to have an alien as a husband.. :D