so touching.. its deep abby :)loved it

yay.. me too mary!! haha love it :D

nice.. :)

hmm..interesting.. nice lesson :)

haha u r welcome :P

HILARIOUS.. U HEAR ME?? :D

haha lol kinda true :D

awesome ela.. u rock!! btw is it gonna be continued?

yeah me too :(

Finally jack reveals yet another masterpiece.. i mean i love this vampire story.. and i hate that twilight shit now that i read this.. infact i hated tht one from the start cos edward puts on too much make up and bella is that expressionless dummy and so i hated it at first sight and im kind of loving this.. id like a movie for this one though lol :D.. keep up btw.. dont ever stop writing :)

so thoughtful!! :D

and I'm really gonna write a story inspired from your masterpiece. :)

u joined typotic and it means a lot to me too :D and btw wheres the next part mister?? :-/

lol aye aye

nice!! wish youd written part two stead of this :P

Love the (not calling the name) part thing in the story.. really cool :D we can call a friend's name.. wont tht be even cooler?? lol just kidding

awww so cute... god i too hate her mom already.. they were so close i already pictured the scene :D

stardust on my cheek is my fave story..tg u kinda continued it lol :D and wow i feel like killing greg at frst but in the end i really felt sorry at his BRAINLESSNESS and btw sandy rocks :D

keep on writin if ull write like this always.. the cuteness just spills out of the way u write lol

aww this is so sweet vishnu.. loved it girl :D

true :)

where r u manelyn?? i so damn miss u.. it seems like we talked centuries ago :( p.s write more :D

Awesome girl!! really well written :D

really nice vishnu!! beautiful story :)

This is so deep... it hurts girl :D really beautiful but like abby a lil hard to understand at frst!! im not the poetic kinda person really XD

"The way we make our fantasy love stories before sleeping at night. The way we cry ourselves to sleep".. uhh love this line dude..so beautiful, painful and yet so true XD

song for the story?? lol :D