Beginning Of the End

by Jack50rko
It was the Night of a full moon.It was new years eve when it all started.It was the night of Joy and Happiness.When people said goodbye's to old sorrows with only good memories in mind.The night of Resolutions.The night when people promise themselves they would change and become a better version of themselves.As people.As Human beings.But Wouldn't it be Ironic that the night when people celebrate the coming of a new begining,a new year be the starting of the end.Well, it was Ironic.People celebrated with joy that night not knowing of the Evil that was going to befall them.The evil that was brewing in the darkness all this time.The evil that was going to finally come out of the shadows.I remember The moon that night.It was as big and bright as I had ever seen it before.It was unusally calm and peacefull too.Maybe it was the calm and tranquility before the storm.I had this Erie feeling.This unusally aching if you will, that made me suspicious of the joyous and peacefull new years eve.Maybe Deep down I knew that something was about to happen,that everything was going to change in mere minutes.But if that were to be true by any chance, then why did I not tell anyone about it.My family, my friends, why did I not warn them of this? Maybe I was too afraid to beleive it myself.But its not like it would've made much of a difference.
The evil was coming and it wasn't about to be stopped easily or maybe not at all.I was always the kind of person who was cut of from reality.I would always lose myself in my own self-constructed world.This happened every now and then when I found myself on the roof of the house.Thinking about life.How my life was at the moment and how I was planning to change it for the better.I always knew I was meant for great things.But what I didn't know was how I was going to make a difference.
Then the time came.When I got my chance.When it all started.I remember just before it happened I was starring at the Moon.It was very bright and blank.Full of nothingness.When I heard a scream coming from the far side of the alley infront of our house.It was really dark and the lights weren't on from some reason in the alley.Kids in my neighbourhood would always make stupid jokes like that to scare people.So I diminished it off as a prank.But then I heard someone calling for help.It sounded like an elder woman.The screams for help slowly kept getting louder and louder.As if she was coming right at me.I saw at the distance a woman.coming out of the dark shadows of the alley towards the street light.She looked tired like she had ran a marathon.I wondered what could've tired her out like that.Was she running from someone,was she late for something improtant.As I was making up possibilities to explain the situation in a logicial way I saw blood.She was bleeding from her neck.I couldn't see how big a wound it was.But I saw the blood drip from her on the street and I could see that it was alot of blood because of the street light.I imediately thought that she must've been robbed.She must've fought back and the wound must have been the aftermath of the attempted resilience.
Then I saw a man walk out of the dark alley.I imediately assumed he was the one who robbed the women and he must have thought to come back and make sure he didn't leave anything espensive behind.As he approached the woman near the street light and as the light fell upon him I saw blood dripping from his coat as well.And as I was making up more excuses to make sense of this tragedy I saw the man grab the woman by her arms and and grunge his teeth into her neck.He was mercilessly squeezing her in his arms and slowly putting his teeth deeper and deeper into her neck.After seeing this unnerving scene, I started shivering with fear and disbelief.What was this man and was he really sucking her blood? If he was then was he a victim of some kind of Insanity or taboo Habit? Or was he really what I thought he was? A descendant of Darkness.A creature of the night.A demon disquised as a human.A Monster.He, or should I say it, was infact,to my disbelief an actual Vampire...
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Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

April 20, 2015 - 21:08 u rock dude!! i love the way u explain everything in umm lemme think.. detailed manner i guess. loved it at frst right.. keep on rocking.. the floor is your lol :D
Jack50rko

Jack50rko

April 20, 2015 - 21:22 Thanks Mana means alot ! xD
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

April 24, 2015 - 18:37 u joined typotic and it means a lot to me too :D and btw wheres the next part mister?? :-/
Jack50rko

Jack50rko

April 24, 2015 - 21:28 haha the next part will be uploaded shortly :)
FieNd

FieNd

April 20, 2015 - 21:09 Very promising!!!
Jack50rko

Jack50rko

April 20, 2015 - 21:23 Thanks man!
abbywookie

abbywookie

April 21, 2015 - 04:36 Ooooohhhhhh, VAM-PIE-YER =D I LOVE vampires, keep the story coming =]
Jack50rko

Jack50rko

April 21, 2015 - 15:43 Thanks abby :D and I will xD
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

April 21, 2015 - 16:37 Hey, this is nice. Like the way everything is explained. Good job. ⌒.⌒
Jack50rko

Jack50rko

April 24, 2015 - 21:26 Thanks alot! and this isnt even the ending..I have a whole book planned xD
katherine phang

katherine phang

April 23, 2015 - 15:44 Good story .... I wish I can explain my story like yours:) ... Your story is very clear and I like it!!
Jack50rko

Jack50rko

April 24, 2015 - 21:27 Thanks Kat! means alot :)
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manelyn

manelyn

May 11, 2015 - 17:16 Such a writing style :) Except for some typos and technical issues, your story is really well-carved! Keep on writing!
Jack50rko

Jack50rko

May 12, 2015 - 21:15 Thanks alot! :D I'll work on those in the next chapter :) Have a nice day!
Jack50rko

Jack50rko

May 12, 2015 - 21:16 I also have a chapter 2 Uploaded if you want to read it and give me your thoughts on that! Thought I should let you know :)
manelyn

manelyn

May 13, 2015 - 12:59 Yes, thank you very much. I'll surely find time to read it :) Keep on writing!

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