i need not say anythng.. you deserved it tats all :P

ahhhhhhhhhh i knew it.. :D if it was for me id probably give it more than frst place but well anyway :D.. u did a splendid job :)

lol aww and u just did it :P

wooowww what a nice lesson steven :D... loved it a lot... :P especially the keep ur mouth shut thingy hahah :D :D

aww cant believe how u keep on improving every time you come up with a story steven :) its really well written.. i wont want to pinpoint the grammatical mistakes cos they are just 2 or 3 i guess.. so tbh, whenever I compare your frst work with the last one im awed.. keep up and good luck :)

ali ababwaish omg.. cant stop laughing xD

and on nurpurs work too :D

i feel the same.. about you being wicked. :/ gee dont comment again okay?? its someone elses story remember.. weve been thru this before xD xD

^ agreed :/

hahahah xD

ahah such a nice light poem :)

Whoa this was soooo emotional... im so sad :( but wait what?? the tot of mutton biryani ahem just makes me happy xD hahah lol just kidding youve written it rly beautifully so keep up :P and yea best ov luck :)

ayeeee i do feel like i was talking to myself now xD

ahem that was just a gud old advice from a kind caps lock sista abby :/

heheh lets not tink bout tat

im sorry but this comes straight from my slothy peachy monkeyish yukish bradish louisish heart CC :D :D :D :D

hahahah such a lovely story.. u picked such a natural topic.. something that goes on in our everyday life.. loved it.. keep up n want more like tis :D

woah O.O im seriously like tat.. what a piece??? honestly its so beautiful and i loved it sooo much.. hope adding it to my fave's list said it all :) and yeah this story needs to win xD

lol xD

yea right abby/. heard what he said?? ^ (if hes a he)

whaa love of math *dies seriously :P

even tho i dint read the entire thing... i know its really nice..keep up..:)

awwwww too adorable.. keep up :)

heyyyyyyy nice story nurpur.. so fictional yet full of humour.. keep up xD

lol ure too short on brain fer tat i agree, solemnly :/

wow full of emotions.. keep up prim :)

shhh wait.. it was vishnu who said it.. :D sorry fer that CC ^