I fully agree with Manahil naiks comment. You did a great job. :)

It's amazing that how relatable this is. You did a great job, mate. Love the song :D

Beautiful and so relatable. :)

Your very welcome. :) Looking forward to read more from ha ;D

Haha. Lol. :D

Thx for the upvote, mate :D

Beautiful and nicely written :) keep it up.

Really well written. I so agree with your every word. Love the rhymes ;D

thanks a lot for the follow :D

That's cool, haha. :D

I went through it already ;D That's cool. :)

The ending was Nicely done here. Pretty senti in it's way :D Great JOb, no mental agony here, heh? -:D

Woah! So mr.writer was in a big mental , --so mean of me but that's cool ;D Hope to read more from ya. p.s Where are you from? :D

Beautiful~

Gah! Remind me how horror is so thrilling. Like it! Interesting and chilly. Nicely written here ;)

Haha. Cool. ;)

Your very welcome :)

Your very welcome :)

Nicely done :)

:) good to hear that :)

Your very welcome :D

Your very welcome and keep writing :")

I really like that how your stories contains such deep messages. Keep it up :)

Nice :)

Beautiful!! :D

Ooh lovey!! :D Nicely written :")

Your very welcome :")