your very welcome :D

I can't understand how can some women gave up their daughters when they are a female themselves :| This story like Manahil said "Reflects the reality." I really like it. :D Good Job.

This is nice :D

Haha. Good Job :D

Nice. Sweet. :D

Thats nice :D

Great decision by the protagonist. So interesting. :D

Poor girl. :(

Aww, this Is so cute. Good job =D

haha. Your very welcome :D

Very beautifully written. It's more like" I'm a nightmare dressed as a daydream" type.

Your story is nice.. .. but you should work on your English. :)

Your very welcome =D I'm glad I was able to make your day ⌒.⌒

Your very welcome :D

"Feelings are something you experience when you read something so good as this piece written by Aditi.R." ⌒.⌒

Your very welcome :D

Aww so cute :D Nice job :)

Sweet. :*

You know this is really good. Every character is so amazing. Nice job. ⌒.⌒

This is so nice!!!!!! Funny though ;D

Be sure to check out my ones and lemme know what ya think. Thanks. =D

Your very welcome ⌒.⌒ that's why I said that =D

Its like one of those prologue episode's of a shounen anime where the protagonist loses his family and is running with sheer determination. I am guessing what if he becomes a vampire too or makes an oath to kill all the vampires. Anyway, I like this chapter. And hey! Calling this a shounen chalets is a big thing. So well yeah. Good job :D

Woah, scary. I really don't want to come face to face with a ghost. I like your story ⌒.⌒

Ah scary! Good job, :D

Hey, this is nice. Like the way everything is explained. Good job. ⌒.⌒

This is nice ⌒.⌒