Thanks for ur comment and the up vote purple tears...

Very nice poem... keep writing :). .. u can also chk out my story The Halloween Night and give ur feedback. ..

Good one... very different and innovative piece of writeup.... hey u can also chk out my post the halloween night and give ur feedback

Nice story.... liked the bonding between the brothers...:)... hey u can also chk out my story The halloween night and give ur feedback. ..

The story is good but the end is confusing...but I guess u did it intentionally. ...

Nice.... i can never write poetry.... u did a gud job... u can read my story the halloween night and give ur feedback. ..

Although I had guessed the end, it still created a curiosity. ... great description. ..gud one...

Yeah... looking forward to read ur post... but hurry up only 7 days left :)

U have described pain very well....i too agree with the above comments. ... but I liked ur story.. u can also chk out my story The Halloween Night. ..

Thanks manahil for ur comment and up vote. .. btw where were you all these days...I hoped to see some post frm u too....

Very nicely written.... very imaginative as well... u have succeeded on scaring us. .. :). .. u can also read my story the halloween night. ..

Very well written. .. its scary ... u have narrated it very beautifully...

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment and up vote rekhanshiraghava... u really made my day :)

I will take it as a compliment since u imagined to be in the shoes of the character.... Thanks :)

I found ur story very creative... gud imagination and yesss it was scary tooo

Thanks the veil of midnight.... what a coincidence... i was also reading ur story right now...

Too good sharmishtha. ... i was totally engrossed reading ur story and the twist in the climax is also gud. ..

Thanks sheelsdevi for your comments and the up vote :)

Thanks Sharmishtha for ur comment and up vote :)

Thank you so much ejay for ur comment and up vote. ..:)

Thanks to you too for the up vote. . :)

Hey nupur. .. nice story....its light hearted as well as scary.... well written

Thanks kimee28 :)

Thanks a lot purpletears :)

Well at least those pants gave him a girlfriend... haha :)

Thank you Katherine :)

Thank you so much Abby... ur comments really motivate me to write more.... thank you :)