The descent of Lee

by LUIS KAY
Lee stands before the council his face expressionless but there is a shadow of darkness enveloping him, an intangible darkness and sadness, a negative force clouding the normally jovial and radiant Lee.
To a cursory eye it would appear Lee is just tense, but to this heavenly host not an iota of thought or feeling is lost, though Lee is a teacher of subtle and master of martial arts here he is among-st his equals and betters.
He braces himself and states his case,- "Father" he directs his voice to the one upon the throne, "I need to go, I must go, I need to find her and talk sense to her, make her see the error of her ways and make her accept to come back home."
The Eternal father replied without opening his mouth, through the telepathic address of immortals,- "Lee my son, what makes you think you will be successful where others have failed,also don't you know Lee, your sister has abandoned the league of immortals out of choice? Though an immortal her frequent dalliance with mortals has made her lose her light and now she dwells in the realm of the fall."
Lee replies through the use of words, unlike other Immortals he is a master of and practices mortal languages, which are frowned upon in the abode of immortals, - "Dad i know her, and i can trust my word (signifies honor and authority an immortals word is sacred can not be broken) and my judgement to bring her back, i give you my sacred vow that i will never come back home unless shes accompanying me."
There was a three minute silence, then the One who sat on the Throne slightly waved his hand and a heap of clothes is all that's left where moments ago the immortal master Lee stood and his garland crown adorned with seven stars flew unto the hands of the Eternal Father, from whose hand a pen came out, whose form and shape its forbidden to put into written form for it indeed wrote into being all that there is. It went to the wall of the living and wrote the name of master Lee. A name which has never been uttered by a living mortal unless at the cost of a mortals life.
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Teddy Kimathi

Teddy Kimathi

October 22, 2015 - 07:30 Hi bro. That's an interesting piece you've penned. Keep writing! ;-)
LUIS KAY

LUIS KAY

October 23, 2015 - 16:50 Thanks Teddy, i will do that and once more thanks for the encouragement
Teddy Kimathi

Teddy Kimathi

October 26, 2015 - 05:49 Welcome bro! Anytime..
Joy

Joy

October 23, 2015 - 21:26 Good one... very different and innovative piece of writeup.... hey u can also chk out my post the halloween night and give ur feedback
LUIS KAY

LUIS KAY

October 24, 2015 - 09:41 Joy, glad that you enjoyed my story and for the wonderful compliments

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