The plot of the story is nice buy there are many typo errors...gud first try... All the best :) u can also chk out my story The Halloween Night and give ur feedback :)

It's ok dear... dont worry... ur baby will be alright. ..:)

Thanks for ur lovely comment....

Well written. .. i am a soon to be mom but I hope I don't go through this :) people should be made aware of psychosis...

A good read... u can also chk out my story The Halloween Night and give ur feedback :)

U r welcome :).... u can also chk out my story The Halloween Night and give ur feedback :)

Ya ur story is funny but I thght it wud be scary too...

Seriously u have a very good imagination. ... very creepy :)... u can also chk out my story The Halloween Night and give ur feedback :)

Sweet and cute story....:)... u can also chk out my story The Halloween Night and give ur feedback :)

Thanks vishnumayaa for your comments and up vote :)

I was reading ur story thinking tht in the end the girls will surprise the boys. But u gave a nice twist to the story saying that the boys were vampires... i liked ur story....only thing I wud like to mention for u to improve wud be tht if u are doing the narration in the story then contine it till the end... but if u r mentioning the names of the characters then do tht. In the start it seems the story is frm sakura's point of view but thn in the end it doesn't seem tht way...

Oh did the incident really happen to you? ?? Sounds scary. ... hey u can chk out my story The Halloween Night and give ur feedback :). ... though it's a fiction :)

Cute story... different from other halloween stories... not creepy :)... good job... u can also read my story The halloween night and give ur feedback :)

Thanks aniket for the feedback and for ur upvote. Many ppl have told me tht they did not like t h e ending. My motive was to create a twist and fear in the mind of the reader. In my opinion if the ending wud have been different then I don't think the story wud have created tht much of an impact. Usually even I don't like sad endings, but since this is a halloween theme I wanted the story to be creepy and gripping which was possible with an unpredictable twist.

Haha. . It's ok u need not say sry... i like honest feedbacks and u said wht u felt...:)

A nice refreshing poem :)... liked the way u have portrayed it... hey u can also chk out my story The Halloween Night and give ur feedback :)

As we had to write a very short story I was restricted to the no. Of words. But cud u be more specific as to what more details I cud have added as I have detailed it as much as I cud... This is just for my knowledge I am asking... :)

Thanks celestialmind for ur comment and up vote :)

Since u have tagged it horror, I was expecting some kind of scary or chilling twist.... There was no conflict in the story...

So is it that Jamie killed his mom??

Thank u kaylee mumba for ur comment and up vote :)

Thank you so much Luis kay for ur lovely comments and the up vote

Nice.... i liked it.... very touching....u can also chk out my story The Halloween Night and give your feedback.

Cute poem.... u can chk out my post the halloween night and give your feedback. ...

Yeah... there's no fun without sibling rivalry. ...

David... i am sorry for Billy. ... poor thing he had seen 2 ghosts.... He can see ghosts :o... surely anybody on his place will lose the will to smile... also I like the way u thought the costume might be cursed. ...

Chilling... scary... what more can I say. .. am speechless... awesome. .. u can also chk out my story The halloween night and wud appreciate ur feedback :)