that would also be a good reason

thanks sharm for liking my poem

thanks rekhan...so i'm not the only one...thanks friend

wow! that's a strong forceful poem.. lucky girl...who isthat girl btw?

very inspiring poem..i like its loveliness

thanks for your concern friend..she's fine and well now..thank god!

ur wc sharm...

thanks velantra for giving me inspiration to move forward!lol...actually,I'm following one of our great writer's lead 'left something to be discussed'... btw...in your own point of view...what reason would you choose for her death? mine was --- dying naturally...being out there...cold..soaked with rain...and there was the presence of thunder...and drifting away...oh! it's really difficult to think of a valid reason friend...

thanks a lot for your comments joy...you're right...sometimes the only way to realize something is the hard way..I'm glad you liked it!

thanks for the feedback sharm...i will try writing on the light side if I could...promise...and I do apologize for contributing to the sadness...maybe I'm more on tragic writing...but I'l try to write a happy or light ending next time...

true horror and suspense! great imagination...and great work...awesome writing!

thanks velantra

yeah!

thanks manahil! im glad you like it

thanks a ton manahil!

thanks mack

yeah..thanks joy...this is also dedicated to all my friends and co-writers here in typotic..thank you all!

....HUGS...

nice poem..keep on writing

thanks sharm! i'm glad u like it...

thanks whispering waters...

i love this poem!

gee..thanks celestial....i'm glad you like it

thanks for the hugs and kisses btw...sniffs

oh my god, velantra! you scared me...i hope it's not pneum...she had'nt see a doctor but she had her medication..thankfully the cough subsided but the flu does'mt...pls tell me it's noy pneum...

thanks a lot joy...i hope that would be soon...

thanks sharm