Hmnnn...cute. At least, rain has made you glad secretly. And rain...I am a lover of it.

Lorenzo! I came back to give my comment to this little gem. ~~*~~ And when our eyes met, my dear Oh, it's heaven on earth, I swear! But I am shy, I don't know why Like a bird in my hand, I let you fly... ~~*~~ I can relate to this poem. It helps me get back to my high school and college days when I have to be serious in my studies so "crushes" are just like stars to me. Cute and sweet. Great job, Lorenzo!

~~*~~ Beware, oh, must beware! Don't just put her anywhere She is a woman, not a toy Beware, beware, oh boy! ~~*~~ A heart that is pure should not be taken for granted...and should not be taken advantage, too. This is great, V!

I have read this already but not yet given my comment because of my limited time. I go back to this piece to give my review/comment. Third verse: there is one thing that caught your attention to that waitress- it is her pretty face. There is truth in this piece that I admire. Most people actually first attracted with a beautiful face and/or body before anything else. Then after some meetings or dates, you will be attracted to the the attitude, not anymore to the physical attributes of the person. Nice one! I think you are also at HP, David. Happy writing here at typotic.

Hehehe. This is quite cute and cool. Love the rhyme and rhythm.

Thanks, Lorenzo.

Thank you so much, Luis.

Thank you also for being supportive here

Thanks

Thank you, David

Thank you, V.

Oh, yes...the title. lol Thanks.

That's love. :)

We can never turn back the time so enjoy life to the fullest whatever age you have now. God bless!

So relevant! Happiness is...when your story is the relevant one that moves and inspires the readers. :) Good job!

Thanks!

Thanks!

Thank you!

Thank you so much!

Thank you so much!

thanks

Thank you. Just musing on sadness...

Yes, you can post the link and I recommend, you also copy the link above, written as the description, that soundcloud file could help the listeners love the poem more. I love this poem!!!

You're welcome! Thank you for voting and commenting on this piece, too.

(: (: (: Sad but beautifully written.Nice rhyme and rhythm.

Thank you!

Thanks, L.