June 26, 2015
December 15, 2015
My Beautiful Dame
My Beautiful Dame
by Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr.
I once had a dame,
angel-like, with a milky skin,
blond hair, green eyes,
and everything nice.
We used to go out and
everybody would fall in love
with my beautiful dame.
Once a brave soul tried to kiss her.
Well, I had to break his jaw
to break his soul.
But my dame came to his rescue,
even kissed the broken jaw.
I fell to my knees
and went to pieces.
angel-like, with a milky skin,
blond hair, green eyes,
and everything nice.
We used to go out and
everybody would fall in love
with my beautiful dame.
Once a brave soul tried to kiss her.
Well, I had to break his jaw
to break his soul.
But my dame came to his rescue,
even kissed the broken jaw.
I fell to my knees
and went to pieces.
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15 COMMENTS
Manahill Naik
June 26, 2015 - 11:54 short, but i can surely feel the feel. nice un :)Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr.
June 27, 2015 - 01:11 thank you manahil.Manahill Naik
June 27, 2015 - 12:00 hah u r most welcome :)Mahoobee
June 26, 2015 - 12:50 Short and sweet. :DLorenzo A. Fernandez Jr.
June 27, 2015 - 01:10 nice to hear that :)Mahoobee
June 27, 2015 - 01:38 Hehe. :DMahoobee
June 28, 2015 - 11:16 Thank you so much for the up vote :DMahoobee
July 16, 2015 - 16:13 Hey Lorenzo!!Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr.
July 16, 2015 - 16:19 oh, welcome. i was asleep :)Mahoobee
July 16, 2015 - 16:20 Uhmm. no worries :DFieNd
June 28, 2015 - 13:16 Well that escalated quickly :DLorenzo A. Fernandez Jr.
June 29, 2015 - 03:22 thanks, FieNdSharmishtha Shenoy
October 26, 2015 - 04:57 Moral beat up the guy but do not break any body partDhaye
December 13, 2015 - 01:05 (: (: (: Sad but beautifully written.Nice rhyme and rhythm.Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr.
December 13, 2015 - 08:36 Thanks a lot ;)