Haha. Thanks sheelsdevi: I notice my vocabulary's a little complex. I'll go easy next time. I appreciate your observation.

Thanks abbycallan n' Good luck to you too!

Thanks estella. Good luck to you too dear.

Thanks for the compliment manahil naik. I loved your story too...I wish I could read more about it. Wishing you the best!

Thank you soha amir abbasi. Am glad you like it.

Thanks for the observation koyaai. I appreciate :)

Thanks :) :)

Thanks koyaai, the beauty of learning English as a second language...I maximize the use of words :D

This is a very creative angle of telling your story. Brief and interesting!

Haha...I didn't want to kill everyone in the story. And the fuel ignited my mind too (figuratively speaking) :D

:-) Thanks Mahoobee! The brown bottle inspired my mind so I went for it :D

Great writing...but sad. Reflects reality so much.

Thanks guys!

Thanks DavidBokolo.

THANK YOU Typotic family for the support! I have never won any writing competition in my life (well, I guess it's because I always shy off). This is really motivating!

Thank you Katherine!

Aaaaw...Thank you FieNd. Am kinda blushing... :-)

Thanks lizjay,am motivated by your sentiment.

Awwww...that's so romantic! I got a smile on my face. Write some more...

I like the story but I feel sad for her. Does she go for another surgery after the accident? Bad bad mom she has!

Thanks for reading guys! And for your encouraging comments. There is a continuation of the story,(I took this excerpt from a book am working on) #manelyn. I hope to publish it someday soon.

A love triangle. Interesting.

Thanks Vishnumayaa! I have more on the way.

Hi Solomon... never thought in a million years of dreams,that you'd ever get to read this. My reaction...OMG!!

Thanks vishnumayaa and manelyn.

Thanks vishnumayaa

:-) is all I can do.