only the reaper knows when

by M smiles
grim-reaper-homer
(this is a very short story about a man died trying to commit suicide)

i'm not sure whats his name but i'll call him Max.

He stands at the tip of a cliff. rope tied around his neck ready to jump off. He put a whole of lethal pills in his mouth. plus aiming a handgun to his head. his whole body trembling with fear.

He jumps off the cliff, pulling the trigger,swallowed the pills. but the gun missed his head and shot the rope and snapped. He fell from the cliff without his head hanged. He then fell into a lake and survived. he got out of the water with his head felt dizzy and nausea. He then threw up the pills. he heard the ambulance and fainted to the ground.

when he woke up in the ambulance, he felt.disappointed about missing the gun's aim.

so he didn't turned out dying with hanging,ammo to the head and swallowing killing pills,
instead,

he died freezing in the ambulance.
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Leet

Leet

December 11, 2014 - 08:12 Made me laugh, pretty good!!!

December 12, 2014 - 12:09 Thanks!
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

April 19, 2015 - 19:05 gosh mary u r so awkward>> but as u say humans are weird n thts what makes them beautiful and i so agree with you :D
M smiles

M smiles

June 29, 2015 - 16:45 XD hehehe
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

June 30, 2015 - 11:35 ure back? where were u lost? :/
M smiles

M smiles

July 5, 2015 - 02:29 im sorryyyy. school stuffs T_T
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

July 6, 2015 - 10:45 Hahaha aww.. welcome back and try catching up soon :) :)
abbywookie

abbywookie

June 26, 2015 - 13:13 so I was browsing through your stories and jeeeeezzzzzz, how could I not stumble upon these stories of yours earlier lol they're all awesome =)
M smiles

M smiles

June 29, 2015 - 16:44 abby u makin me blush. staph XD <3 and girl,thanks for reading ma storeyyss.
abbywookie

abbywookie

June 30, 2015 - 12:07 hahaha why you're welcome :)

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