Lack of Oxygen!

by nupur27
There is a spirit of innocence, a devil, an angel, a hypothetical illusionary soul in everybody around. This is one such incident from the life of jack! Jack is a person full of mischievous pranks. He is known as a prankster among his friends. The one that is fun loving, always sleep in the lecture hall, famous amongst the gang of girls, drinks hard drinks, smokes as rigorously as a chain smoker, spend money ruthlessly and even help his fellow friends to enjoy life as a collegian to the fullest. The happiness and luxury, he was going to enjoy over his entire life; he spent all those moments written in his fate in a fast forward mode in his youth. Till the time he made his friends enjoy by clubbing and drinking and showing movies and playing video games, those fake faced friends were going round and round of him. But after pumping out all the oxygen from the oxygen tank written in his fate, his days of life didn't get a minute less. But the oxygen tank was emptied. His later phase of life was living in a room beside the attic on a chair with corrosion and a typing machine, where he can write his last words of loneliness. The bottle of beer is now replaced by a tonic bottle for his fatal liver disease. Which disease is left to enter his body, even he doesn't know! He got lost in the agony of this world. No money. No job. Ni family. Who will take responsibility of a guy like him? He didn't take his life sincerely and life didn't care for him seriously. The only thing left with him was dissatisfaction, empty rooms, depressing thoughts and a life of burden. The moral of this dark story is as bright as light could be: save your oxygen from the oxygen tank written in your fate! Don't rush to get all the happiness at superlative level in one day. When that happiness was written to be felt over a number of days. Don't go blindfolded and live a life as a game! Live your life as a king! Being at the top most position even, the heart and soul and specifically the brain should be kept on ground level. Fly the wings over the himalayas but don't forget to that landing matters a lot. If jack took a fast flight, he should have learnt about the landings even. An attic with a typing machine with a bottle of bitter tonic is not life. Life is the light spread around even living in that attic will look like 7 heavens and the last words will be full of satisfaction rather than loneliness. Get an eye opener window showing brightness in your life from the story of Jack! Make it vulnerably beautiful rather than seeing the cliché of dark side. Get your odds out of the evens and let happiness come to you in your later phase!
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Velantra

Velantra

July 13, 2015 - 16:00 Thank you for your vote. The reason I voted for you is not because you voted for me, but because last week a family member past away. The only thing that was told about him, was where he was born and his life journey. My husband asked me: "What legacy would you leave behind, when you die?" Your story gets me thinking again: what legacy do we leave behind? It makes you think, thanks for that.
nupur27

nupur27

July 13, 2015 - 16:11 The legacy we build through our entire life sums up in the end. Thanks for your generous reply @Velantra
Velantra

Velantra

July 14, 2015 - 12:22 Only a pleasure.
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 14, 2015 - 15:06 Has a really deep message. Nicely done. Good luck.
nupur27

nupur27

July 14, 2015 - 15:07 Thanks a lot for support Mahoobee
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 14, 2015 - 15:11 Your very welcome :D
sheelsdevi

sheelsdevi

July 14, 2015 - 19:57 Nupur..beautiful work.the self explanatory way in which you have driven home a message for the unruly lifestyle of the modern youth, is appreciable...Its moral in other words is " always save for the rainy day" Nice work
nupur27

nupur27

July 15, 2015 - 05:58 Thank you so much!!! For understanding the measage in the best possible way!! I am glad to have your responses!
Zeame

Zeame

July 14, 2015 - 20:07 A very true story. Good work, keep it up.
nupur27

nupur27

July 15, 2015 - 05:57 Tysm zeame for acknowledging!!
Nonopha

Nonopha

July 15, 2015 - 10:37 Great story, loved the message behind it. You wrote it nicely, and one can see the disadvantages of bad behaviour
nupur27

nupur27

July 15, 2015 - 13:08 Truely nonopha!! This youth need to get this message!! I wish I could give it to everyone!!
Zeame

Zeame

July 15, 2015 - 11:42 Your welcome nupur27. :)
PenFairy

PenFairy

July 16, 2015 - 05:35 A great message indeed. Life is short, but the journey is long. Never take pleasure by jeopardizing the future! Bravo..
nupur27

nupur27

July 16, 2015 - 10:51 Tysm penfairy!!!! For understanding the message so correctly!!! And also for vote up!!

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