I Quit !!

by Susan Jacob
The world I see is dark
the colour is black

Sympathy is gone
humanity is worn

Love is rotten
and Goddess is forgotten

Violence I see around
and deceased on the ground

Feeling-less have these people grown
and awful have their mind blown

Wrong is the place I arrived
not the place she described

She told me I get to love here
no, hatred and disdain I bear

I was told I get to grow healthy here
no, illness and malady I suffer

I was meant to be happy here
no I am not, not here

This indeed is not the place
she asked me to chase

I must have been mistaken
or at a glance, she would be shaken

Resenting with a sigh
here I bid good-bye
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rekhanshiraghava

rekhanshiraghava

April 6, 2016 - 19:45 Deep n dark.... Well expressed....
Susan Jacob

Susan Jacob

April 7, 2016 - 08:03 Thankyou dear :-) you made my day :)
purpletears

purpletears

April 6, 2016 - 21:53 I loved the raw honesty of your poem. I can relate...
Susan Jacob

Susan Jacob

April 7, 2016 - 08:03 Thankyou so much , it really means a lot :-)
davidehrgott

davidehrgott

April 16, 2016 - 20:21 I know the feeling...
Susan Jacob

Susan Jacob

April 18, 2016 - 07:20 :-) i know,,, many can relate Thank you so much for the upvote david

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