Dedicated to David and the people in his Country
"He looked at me, it was as if his eyes were blood red. She looked half drunk, a hunger in her eyes as if she wanted to devour me… right there!"
This story is about starting over, when the one you love pass away.
This story is dedicated to the friends I made on Typotic, especially: Ejay, Sharmishtha and Samewriter, who allowed me to use their work. Also to everyone else reading it, I hope you enjoy it!
it is about my birthday - 5 January Booooringggg...............
Dedicated to my Sister who passed away recently and my brother who had to say goodbye to his young wife
9 COMMENTS
Lea Ebio
February 2, 2016 - 13:27 this is so sad?what happened?DavidBokolo
February 2, 2016 - 14:32 Velantra, this almost put me in tears. Thanks for your feeling. It's from the bottom of the concerned heart. I'll share it on my FB page and twitter.Velantra
February 2, 2016 - 19:46 It is a pleasure and it is from my heart, we saw footage on television and it is shocking. xdavidehrgott
February 3, 2016 - 01:32 speechless!Velantra
February 3, 2016 - 21:22 thank you David and thanks for the up voteDhaye
February 4, 2016 - 11:51 A poem with so much compassion. This is so touching.Velantra
February 5, 2016 - 10:51 Thanks, we saw the footage on television. You once wrote, you put yourself in the orher persons shoes, when you write. I did that, it's so sad. I was crying.bodystringer
March 28, 2016 - 10:55 I like your poets. It opens like a flower, filled with expression and passion.pies11
October 1, 2019 - 22:41 Hello i am miss Brenda i have private discusion with you via at(piesbrenda106@gmail.com)