First Impression

by bestdianneever



Right from the day that we met,
You are the one I can't forget,
It was your eyes which caught my attention
'Cause they speak a thousand of emotion
And I smiled in admiration.

Your smile is filled with sincerity
And your heart, with purity
I can't help but adore such kind of beauty
You are as graceful as a ballerina
And as keen as a goddess named Athena.

Your voice sounds like an angel's melody
That would even take my fears away
Honey, you could keep me dancing all day
My feelings for you were too easy to reject
And the way I see you is just too perfect.
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Cyneburg's Field

Cyneburg's Field

August 12, 2015 - 16:18 love is in the air~
bestdianneever

bestdianneever

August 12, 2015 - 16:21 lol te Kim. It's just an excerpt of the poem I made for Rizal subject. Huhu.
Cyneburg's Field

Cyneburg's Field

August 12, 2015 - 16:28 still tho, the words in that poem feels real. I'm pretty sure Rizal would be so proud to recite this to his "iniirog" :^)
P'yonce Knowmore

P'yonce Knowmore

August 13, 2015 - 10:16 wow someone is in love...nice poem...
rekhanshiraghava

rekhanshiraghava

August 13, 2015 - 10:54 Nice.... Perfect rhyming .... Beautiful words..
aniketnikhade

aniketnikhade

August 16, 2015 - 18:10 The first stanza of the poem is perfectly written and works very well. The poem is very well written. I enjoyed reading the first stanza because it seemed flawless.

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