well in one direction we can - sculpting the future according to our liking!
there are very nice dynamics in this poem! I can't find the right word, but there is something about it - truth? sincerity? - that makes it very interesting to read. Maybe a very truthful honesty with yourself about how you feel? It seems as if the poem bears wittnes to some humbling acceptance that is starting to emerge - would you say it is in any way involved in how you feel? thanks!
thanks - but still not sure if well said...?
thanks - funny thing: this one wasn't actually typed, which is what I usually do ;)