My goodness your thought process in this story is so very intriguing. .some phrases caught on like wildfire.very different and very interesting.good one..

That was a head full. .the story, although was a bit run of the mill , it captured my attention to the maximum..it did lead to a fitting climax..well done friend

Thanks sandysaan for that remarkable review

It did confuse me a bit in the beginning .But slowly the story took on a very interesting and spooky turns and twists..good read..a fitting climax too.

Thanks a lot usha for that lovely comment.

Thanks for your feed back ..dear friend

The story was spooky..but it should have had something connected to halloween too..but I liked its tempo build up

I am so happy dear friend ejay to read your wonderful comment.

Thank you sudha..

Thanks for that wonderful comment..rekhanshiraghava

Thanks my dear friend

Oh goodness ..that was indeed scary..you kept the tempo rising with your story telling..looked very professional and eerie.great work.. friend

Chizoba..you bet...come to kerala..a state down south of India ..we celebrate temple festivals with elephants..Sometimes by the sound and light and total festival mayhem..these tamed elephants loose their cool and decide to rebel. .it has happened many a time..people get chased and stamped to death even, by an innocent swish of elephant trunks.. Still not believing

Thank you so much rekha

thanks rekha for your prompt reply

What do you mean by that statement"tellMe YourName"

No I will not let her go ..because you have presented her so beautifully

Hahah Thanks friend..that is a good way of complimenting

Thanks manahil

Interesting thought ..I liked it .

Thank you Mahahil..your comments are indeed so precious

Yes PriM. ..what you said is tbe same emotion that pass through me , when I see caged birds..the elite consider it as their prestige issue to cage a beautiful bird..this poem is the result of my empathy for those trapped souls.. Thanks a lot friend for your good comment

A poignant write..waiting anxiously

I felt as if I was on a fairy tale reading spree..very imaginative ..well expressed

Thanks for that wonderful comment. .abbycallan

Beautiful and meaningful lines.. Yes life is actually a spectrum of lights ..it is according to our moods that it changes colours..

Tbanks a lot manahil..it is a kind of menace down here in kerala