Very nice

Congratulations :-)

CONGRATULLLLLAAAATIONS! :)

Good one! Simple and involving....

Thanx rubi for being first one to comment. Will take care to add some interst in next peice.... this one has to go like this only. :)

That one is cool!!!! :)

Is this story yours?sure...!?

Nice story.nice thought. u can do one thing ,if u can ,get it corrected by someone whom u think is better in language before publishing. Yes it was difficult to follow. Am sorry but "massage Raman on facebook"made me burst into laughter. That is nothing every one has one or the other problem. U check it urself,use dictionary to correct the spellings. ... you will rock....yeah!

Leaving moms part ( it sounded unrealistic for a mother) i liked the story. A new expression for a very ancient moral. :)

Very well framed.Nicely bound with flow of words.almost no gramatical and typing mistake...! Would have added charm with a little more clarity of plot. THUMBS UP!!! :)

Nice1 for u r so small

Little deeds of kindness,little words of love...... :)