it worked. Thank you so much, you are a life saver! <3

Ya I can still edit it, but according to the rules I can only submit one

Thanks hey, but I submitted a wrong story, so this one doesn't really count for the competition ;(

Thanks guys. yes, that uncle is supposed to be ankle

Well written, absolutely loved it

Great story, i love the way it leaves the reader with questions that can also be easily answered of figured out. Big ups

i like day 17. the whole thing is kinda cute though, most guys don't write diaries.

love the emotion in it. In the first half of it you wrote in in first person, then changed later towards the ending. This can be confusing at times as one will wonder if the main character is discussing another character he is suddenly thinking about. other than that, this is a job well done;)

Very descriptive, i liked it

I love beautiful tragic love stories, good one, and the dialogue was nice

Yeah, lucky enough Mahobee informed me yesterday, so i posted another. Thanks;)

Thanks hey

very beautiful story for children, it is well written, big ups!

I found it, thanks, i wrote another piece.

This is a well written piece, but i did not understand the source of Daisy's depression

I love the descriptive part of it, you make the reader feel what the character is going through, and place themselves in that same environment. Loved it!

Great story, loved the message behind it. You wrote it nicely, and one can see the disadvantages of bad behaviour

I checked, but still can't find

Thanks ;) Where do I find the challenge?