awesome sista!! wow i love the way u write poems.. its so different..p p.S: its been a while hasnt it?? since we caught up!! missin u :(

Hey you published like so Many stories i didnt even know u had this Masterpiece hidden somewhere until i stalked your account Abby!! lol :P this is the best and couldn't get any better.. hmm.. and u actually made me THINK!! ill definitely write a story inspired from this one lol if only you please CC!! :P

hey loved the concept!! really well written and btw are u new here?? if yes then welcome to typotic!! besides, it would be better if u made the story even lengthier but anyhow, it's really nice!! great job and keep up :D

So true!! :) nice one

WOW! This story is impeccable i swear.. and the details,, were kinda addicting lol... loved it keep up penfairy :D :D

good one natsume!! hey where r u from btw??? :D

lol!! a big cheers :P.. and lets not comment here any longer cos its someone else's property lol :D xD

BEAUTIFUL!!! hahaha u started inspiring me since i met you lol :D keep up fairy *makes a victory sign :D

really imaginative!! nice story.. good job and keep up :)..

E.X.A.C.T.L.Y sometimes its only me online on the entire site.. it gets so lonely :( :(.. p.s: arent we ppl getting used to each other?? like a lot :D

oh its not really like that.. uhmm actually i think when u write something you gotta have a solid reason behind it definitely.. whch wasnt so clear here so its always better to be clear so the readers can understand the msg u wanna convey.. anyway i see the thing in you and i know you can write cos even if i didnt get the plot, the way u write was really nice.. keep up and try ur hardest best of luck :D

good for ya suzume!! :D

LOl thats somewhat true :P

hmm likes :)

hmm didnt get what you actually wanted to tell... :/

yes definitely Steven.. a lot more easier and yes ill be waiting for your story.. :) hope to catch up soon!

haha gotcha.. btw some of the paragraphs are still a little big.. add more line breaks jacki :D

hey it would be better if u added more line breaks steven.. :)

oh no not at all... i liked it.. but the question mark in my mind irritated me so i tot i shud ask.. anyway loved ur story really :) keep up

haha nice one.. p.s:: mahoobie uve been reading so much stuff lately lol :D :D

theres a lump in my throat which i just wanna gulp down but this story really touched me and kinda made me wanna cry..:( :( im actually an animal-lover haha not forgetting to mention i actually cried when my cat got a little sick.. lol u had a real big heart to actually write something so senti mental... keep up hopin for more :)

hahaha.. lol wish i could teach something useful FHC!!

whod kill him?? i was wondering..

hmm.. another cute-est story from the sweet-est girl ever.. this is really nice.. but i was wondering... howd u get drowsy when u drink juice??? haha lol anyway hopin to see Day 2 soon .. all the love :D

ohhhhhh interesting.. hmm.. really nice!! sorry for the psychopath tho.. *sigh :(

haha.. wow lovin those details.. good job fairy!! :D

heheh ikr.. p.s hope u dont confuse with ikr guess u learned it ;P