Very well written.
Menacing and interesting. Wow!
Yes, for sure. It is the emotionality and human values that strike the heart. Good going!
A sweet sad story. Reminds me of a real life incident with a balloon man whose daughter was in her father's lap because she had no shoes.
Take care :)
Very nice. Imprisonment of the soul.
Eerie, but good.
I also loved the way you used the cat as a prop. Hey would you care to comment on my story, it is called 'When nothing works...' Thanks in anticipation!
Very interesting! The way the ring resolved the dispute between the two sisters.
Thanks a lot for your kind words!
Thanks a lot, really kind of you!
Very good, graphic and moving.