Definitely I agree with you, it written in a planned way, but then it was neither with regards to purpose or with respect to any intention. All I did was went ahead with the flow that was present, then at that point in time. Thank you so much for your precise observation and constructive way of telling things.

Definitely I agree with you. The poem was written with a positive mindset. Thanks a lot for appreciating my work.

It feels so nice that you liked this poem of mine. Thanks for your comment and kind words.

Seldom I go for regular walks, which include morning walks. I like all sorts of trees, those which are found by the side of the road and also those that can be seen in garden. Thank you so much for your kind words.

Enjoyed reading this story, which goes very well right from the start and follows along. The end of the story is perfect. A very well written story, which is interesting and engrossing because the events are very well woven one after another, followed by the right end.

I agree the entire focus is on the garden right from the start. So definitely I portrayed the garden keeping in mind what all was going on in my mind. Thank you so much for your kind words.

Dreams, illusions, reflections are part of everyone's life. Happiness and sadness is also part of everyone's life. The plotting and story is good, except the end. In the end it can be something like no one knows where Mrs Cooper went away. If this happens then also the meaning will be the same that she has died. With the kind of energy and enthusiasm you have invested in this story, followed by the twists and turns, if in the end Mrs. Cooper does not die and disappers then it will make the readers read again the whole story. Of course in doing so there should be no confusion, since you have got a sharp edge to cover each and every detail. I liked reading this very well written short story, which is interesting and engrossing.

Definitely I agree with you. The last two lines of the poem serve as a reminder of what you say. Thank you so much for your kind words.

Definitely the flow of the poem was worked upon keeping in mind the mood and time during which events in the poem take place. Thank you so much for your kind words.

Definitely it's refreshing because the time is that of early morning hours and the theme is that of a pleasant morning when the entire city has still not got ready to go to work. Thanks for your kind words.

Thank you so much for reading my poem and appreciating my work. The term "imperative" means a lot, especially the way in which you have mentioned. Thanks a lot.

The first stanza of the poem is perfectly written and works very well. The poem is very well written. I enjoyed reading the first stanza because it seemed flawless.

This is a very well written poem. Everything metioned in the poem is simple and definitely keeps the readers interested till the end. A very will written poem, which is presented in a unique way and it is also interesting.

The poem has got a few elements which need attention. The poem is very well written and it works very well. After reading the poem the first thing that came to mind is the term "Reciprocate", followed by "Reversal" and then subject to change are my feelings, emotions and thought process. This line "As we get along as friends" needs to be checked and changed. The same line can be written as "When we get along as friends". This is then followed by the last line which states "If the feelings are still there." The same line can be written as "If the feelings are still the same" After reading the poem I remembered of a tennis ball game which is usually played quite often by youngesters. Based on the game all I want to say is the there is a scope for editing the lines and including new words and excluding the old ones. This is because the thought process is clear, the direction is proper and the way in which everything needs to be mentioned is very well know. So why not take the next step. Thus the tennis ball is thrown against the wall and it will definitely return back to you as you are the only one who is playing the entire game. A very well written poem.

I enjoyed reading the last three stanzas of your poem. The poem has a constructive approach of dealing with difficulties and a positive attitude of an individual. This can be seen through the poem itself as it approaches towards the end.