I was smiling all the way while reading :D

your writing style is cute hahaa...enjoyed the read =)

Yeah, tick tock...hahaaa thanks for reading and commenting! =)

Glad you loved it! =) thanks for dropping by and commenting :)

Wow I enjoyed reading this so much! :D thanks for writing this awesome tale. A fresh breath of sci-fi. Loving it, keep writing! =)

Awesome story! Love the last two lines ;)

Can totally relate to this. This story crushed my heart. :( wish I could somehow give that little boy a hug

Gave me the chills....:/ creepy in one word

I love fangirl stories!! :D uh...since i'm clearly one as well lmao...actually I thought you're gonna say niall horan but then the word dalton came up and I was like, 'don't let it be john dalton, no...' lmao and in the end you said he's dalton rapattoni and im like, 'Ah....' XD

Awh.....poor jackal :(

Sad in a realistic way...:( but good story though

This got to my heart... sad and sweet :|

Really, I'm gonna punch that Nick guy

Awwhhhh....a bittersweet one. Literally melted when I read this line from her diary, "Thank you for being my first love, first heartbreak and first boyfriend." haha...took me awhile to understand the story, but love the characters anyway :)

Jeez I totally know that self-conscious and awkward stuff whenever an Ex is near...I actually agree when you said, "a list of friends is better than a list of ex's"

OK, so I helped pass on your message. Ethan was like, "...a WEDDING?" and his grin was so broad I swear his face was breaking into two. I think he's busy sending out invitations to the Teletubbies right now...haha. Thanks so much for dropping by and reading my story :))

GEE, that was just plain elegiac... but I suppose it's better that way than having yourself stuck with a buddy who doesn't even know your true feelings...that would be so much more painful :/ But still, your writing rocks :)) Loving it

Yeah I agree. Instinct is a powerful thing.

Love your ripple metaphor. This whole thing did shed a light on me, glad I stumbled upon your work :)