June 21, 2018
TEARED
Emotive prose
TEARED
by LUIS K.Tears welled up
Bitterness clouding
A normally jolly soul
Now hurting so so
Who would have thought
That love would hurt so
She had survived the war
She had survived the terrorist
Raging torrents and floods
Only to succumb
To the bite of love
A taste bitter and sweet
From the very first bite
Why hurt her so
Why why.. she trailed
Thoughts now in rapid succesion
Invading her usually calm demeanor
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2 COMMENTS
calemarks
June 21, 2018 - 15:08 So beautiful topic. I like writing poems. You can visit https://publiclab.org/profile/Parong for acquaintance with my work also. It's cool to share with thoughts and feelings.LUIS K.
May 28, 2021 - 21:57 Thanks For That beautiful comment.. I will