On the right corner of my home page
Is your name beside a dot of green
I don’t know if it’s the name or the circle
That makes the heart flutter in.

I clicked on your name without any thoughts
Stared on that blank page
That annoying blinking cursor
Shouting, "Come on! Type something! Anything!

I took all courage to say “Hi.”
And took a deep breath then a sigh
I waited for a reply
Whatever may it be, even an aye.

“Seen” is what it said
And three excited dots appeared
Carrying the words “Typing...”
Golly throbbing heart thumping!

But then the three dots disappeared
And what’s left is just “Seen”.
Where are the three dots that says "Typing"?
For their return, I’ll still be waiting.
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FieNd

FieNd

August 15, 2015 - 13:49 No time to answer :D?
Cyneburg's Field

Cyneburg's Field

August 17, 2015 - 17:16 I wonder how long the narrator can wait? :D
rekhanshiraghava

rekhanshiraghava

August 15, 2015 - 18:59 Its something that happens with everyone.. but not everyone can write about it. Thats why hats off.... good work indeed
Cyneburg's Field

Cyneburg's Field

August 17, 2015 - 17:17 thank you so much! your comment means a lot to keep me a little bit inspired to write more :)
bestdianneever

bestdianneever

August 16, 2015 - 07:40 Bloody hell, te Kim, this is just so relatable. Huhu
Cyneburg's Field

Cyneburg's Field

August 17, 2015 - 17:18 Haha! ikr? xD
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

August 17, 2015 - 20:50 o.O so relatable.. but to be honest, for me this poem is a kind of support now that i know its not only me who feels like a jerk when we're in this situation :D tenkuu so very much for a literally awesome poem.. and even tho i have 62 faves doesnt rly mean that i add all good writes in the list.. i only add those that hit me direct in the heart and stay there :) keep up.. <3 <3 <3
Cyneburg's Field

Cyneburg's Field

August 18, 2015 - 16:30 hahaha yaahhh I guess a lot feels like a jerk everytime. xD thanks! it's already a big deal that you added it on your fave list. :))
Natzu

Natzu

March 5, 2019 - 16:02 Very sensitive and touching poem, if anyone is interested, then on this page I collect works on the problems of modern society https://taiiyabilanna.kinja.com

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