Oblivion!! in my Subconscious Mind!!
I tried so hard to write about my fear!! But couldn't go well with any single stuff! So was thinking and thinking and the went to sleep!!! Next day my head was full of fearful thoughts that were imbibed in my subconscious tiny miny brain!
Oblivion!! in my Subconscious Mind!!
by nupur27Went all night long in my tiny brain so dear!
The this and that of all the things,
That made me a pessimist from an optimist being!
I was full of anxiety to write one!
But got my mind thunder-struck with oblivion!
What if the trees grow upside down?
With leaves beneath and roots above brown!
What if the world is square?
And despair in London Square!
What if the earth is a star?
And shine like a pole star!
What if the rain is drought
With summer in thought
For winter to arrive
And no-man survive?
What if the black is blue
And black hole is true?
What if the bird is animal?
And fight with all qualities of cruel!
What if the king is never - mighty?
But ruins the name of almighty!
What if killing is happiness
And all species drown in floods of sadness?
What if the gods came down
Like jack and jill tumbling down!
To fetch a pellet of laughter
Will not get any but a return with agony after!!
What if The world is a terror struck
And road accidents of all the truck?
Will it all remain, the way it be!
The way it is meant to be!
What if I wake up with blood all around?
Where I can't see my mother around!
What if no reader to read?
For the feelings that a writer feeds!
I can't see my loved one to die by a painful death disease!!
Rather I could wish a sudden death witn no disease!!
Afraid to see what is not meant to be real!!
Coz, however awesome, virtual is! The present is always real.
A bang on NO came to my spine!!
And got me upright down charging no fine!!
The what if's caught me down
With fever of fear in my hearts deep down!
But my subconscious mind still craves!!
For not seeing my beloved one's graves!!
To have all these dispairs all it takes,
To throw out the negate from all the ways!
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The greatest fear of mine is to see the world not as it is now!!
I am happy to be sad in midst of my loved ones!!
But fear to be left, in the agony of the cuel ones!!
I wish to remain in the time I belong!!
Born in the race I see
Belong to people like you and me!
And not the fantasy that drives me crazy to death!
Fantasies that aren't real!!!
Are the root cause of fear!!
*fear*
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58 COMMENTS
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August 2, 2015 - 14:37 Up votes.... 10... Favourite.... yesss.... Classic work... Great writing... I must say nupur... u are an amazing in expressing... brilliant ....nupur27
August 2, 2015 - 14:42 Ommgg!!!!!! Is it???? U really liked it??? I am not good at poems though!!! But tried one!!! Thannkkikee thankkiieerekhanshiraghava
August 2, 2015 - 14:45 Same here... i am the worst when it comes to writing poems.... But honestly... this one rocksss... I loved it...nupur27
August 2, 2015 - 14:47 Thanksss alloott rekha!!!! Hope everyone likeyyy likky my this one!! Just like u!!celestialmind
August 2, 2015 - 16:32 What if I reckon...Fantasies that aren't real; Are the root cause of fear. This is a great piece of writing. I love the way its made me think about the what ifs. Keep it up!nupur27
August 2, 2015 - 17:33 Hahahhaha thanks alot for comment!!! Upvote!!! And all the what if's that are deep rooted!!!!manelyn
August 2, 2015 - 16:41 Very creative nupur :) you've summed up your fears in one poem..good job!nupur27
August 2, 2015 - 17:35 It was a nightmare!!!!! And I wrote it all!!! Well u got time for upvoting thankkoooiioP'yonce Knowmore
August 2, 2015 - 16:42 The poem gave me goose bumps.....it is well written and enjoyable. Kept me wanting more and more. Keep it up the poem is superb!nupur27
August 2, 2015 - 17:35 Owww posh!!! For reader pen friends like u!!!! I am all up for more and more posts!!! Tha kiiieenupur27
August 2, 2015 - 17:36 ThankiiieeeMahoobee
August 2, 2015 - 18:16 Stunning and beautiful with q touch of magic!! Keep rocking :Fnupur27
August 2, 2015 - 18:26 Aawww!!!! Thankiiee thankkoo mahoobeee:):):)Mahoobee
August 3, 2015 - 03:39 Your very welcome !! :*) best of luck!!nupur27
August 3, 2015 - 04:10 Best luck to u tooo mate :)hiren shah
August 2, 2015 - 19:26 Superb.. I need the poem like this. Thanks buddy..nupur27
August 2, 2015 - 19:55 Thanks a lot buddyyy!!!!!!sheelsdevi
August 2, 2015 - 19:41 Very well explained . beautiful poem. Such high voltage fear.nice readnupur27
August 2, 2015 - 19:56 Thank you so much for loving it!!! Hope for the best results!! :PmischievousPrincess
August 3, 2015 - 05:53 Great Masterpiece ! :) You did a great job :) Very Well written :) I so much like your creativity ;) Keep up the the good work (Y)nupur27
August 3, 2015 - 07:51 Heyyoo!!! Thankksss a lot!!! Masterpiece!!! This made my day!!!! ThANkyouu for the upvote:):)ezzah
August 3, 2015 - 11:19 I'm new to this site I had no idea that it was full of talented and intellectual people... beautiful poem (Y) Keep it up! :)nupur27
August 3, 2015 - 12:26 Ezzah!!!!! U made mah evening totally!!! Such a beautiful comment I woke up with!!! Thankyouuu for the upvote!!!! / :):)ezzah
August 3, 2015 - 12:39 Your welcome :) Good luck!Manahill Naik
August 3, 2015 - 13:20 this is the BEST !!! you i hope u hear me :P your words just speak to me so frickin well im awed... good luckiiee nuurrrrnupur27
August 3, 2015 - 14:39 Awwww manAhilll!!!! Loveeeeeyyyy dovveeyy mate!!!! Mahoo told me to club everything and write!!! And did the same!!! Hoping for results!!!! Wish lucks to u tooo:):):)Manahill Naik
August 3, 2015 - 14:41 haha lovey dovey back xDsamewriter
August 3, 2015 - 16:17 I guess I would share those fears with you. Couldn't even imagine the world opposite to what it is right now. So awed by the way you write it and scared of those lines. Hahaha, having a hard time putting my thought into words. This is a masterpiece :Dnupur27
August 3, 2015 - 16:19 Omg same!!!! Is it????? I would gv credit to mahoo for telling me to write, sum it all!!! And i wrote whatever I thought while thinking of actual fears of mine!!!! Total fanatic!!! But real for me! Hahhahaasamewriter
August 3, 2015 - 16:23 aight, you should. someone just have to encourage us to do stuff and booooommm.nupur27
August 3, 2015 - 16:25 Hahhhaah same!!! All is imbibed within every person!!! Just need to frame it all!!!samewriter
August 3, 2015 - 16:27 i agree. other people people have a greater view of our other parts :Dnupur27
August 3, 2015 - 16:56 The ones tat hurt!!! Totally have such views!!!! HahhaaDavidBokolo
August 3, 2015 - 19:08 It keeps me spinning and I asked when it will stop. Dat's a Shot.Nnupur27
August 3, 2015 - 20:14 Heyyy david!!! Thanks a lot for the comment and upvote:):):)mackdonnut
August 4, 2015 - 05:37 upvote....great one....the dynamic of lines are amazing......rock 'n roll to the world...nupur27
August 4, 2015 - 05:38 Owwww!!! Thankyou sooo much!!! For the upvote and comment!!! This means a lot!!! Thankiiee thankiiee!!abbywookie
August 4, 2015 - 06:01 gee this got me thinking, Cabby's Founder... totally relatable and whoaaaaa you're a pro at rhyming hahaha :D nice one. good luck! =]nupur27
August 4, 2015 - 06:27 Heeyyoo abby the cabby!!!! Thankkiiee for the comments and upvote!!!:):):):) Wish u luck 2..3..4..5...!!!Nightingale
August 4, 2015 - 17:27 What if I tell You it's amazing. Funny, contemplative all in one! :-)nupur27
August 4, 2015 - 19:49 What if I say that it's a pleasure to hear tat from u!!! ThankkiioRucha
August 5, 2015 - 05:17 A fabulous work I guess!!!! The fear felt like wooaahh!!!! Loved it totalllly!!nupur27
August 5, 2015 - 13:39 Owwww ruch!!! Even u signed in this!!!!! Thankiiiee thankkiiieeee soulmate !!!Disha
August 5, 2015 - 12:37 A very well combined writeup on fear....:)nupur27
August 5, 2015 - 13:43 Thannkkkiiiii disha!!!!!Kooki
August 5, 2015 - 13:24 Ohhhh!!! Such a great fearfullll post!!! Loved it the most!!!!nupur27
August 5, 2015 - 13:43 Aawewww kooookkiii thanks fo liking it!!!!kaushal
August 5, 2015 - 13:32 A nice writeup... :)kmehta
August 5, 2015 - 13:36 Good Job...keep It up...Vishnumayaa
August 5, 2015 - 13:54 Ha..ha finally you got a piece to write Great job, keep writing ALL THE BESTnupur27
August 5, 2015 - 13:58 Helll yea!!!!nupur27
August 5, 2015 - 13:58 Thankiiee for last minute upvote!!!!abbywookie
August 5, 2015 - 14:03 CABBY'S FOUNDER CONGRATS! :Dnupur27
August 5, 2015 - 14:07 Alllll thankkiiiee abby!!!!!!!!Ashish14
October 21, 2015 - 07:58 Oblivion :*
October 21, 2015 - 10:05 comment has been removednupur27
October 21, 2015 - 10:05 A huge one this is;););)Jack50rko
March 20, 2016 - 10:55 Great Work! Made me start thinking :Dnupur27
October 7, 2016 - 17:32 Thankuuuu