It is about being confused about things happening in your life...... Free verse
"He looked at me, it was as if his eyes were blood red. She looked half drunk, a hunger in her eyes as if she wanted to devour me… right there!"
This story is about starting over, when the one you love pass away.
This story is dedicated to the friends I made on Typotic, especially: Ejay, Sharmishtha and Samewriter, who allowed me to use their work. Also to everyone else reading it, I hope you enjoy it!
it is about my birthday - 5 January Booooringggg...............
Dedicated to my Sister who passed away recently and my brother who had to say goodbye to his young wife
8 COMMENTS
Sharmishtha Shenoy
November 12, 2015 - 08:25 Does not match the mood of your other poem! Why so sad? :-) Keep smiling.Velantra
November 12, 2015 - 13:28 Life is hectic, hubby is having a big operation in two weeks. My baby start school next year. Time to write, to run a house. Washing!!!! Ironing!!! Cleaning!!! Dust...... My writing makes me feel better, I love to write, I never ever had any one believing that I have any talent what so ever to write. I must have written a million things in my mind and a million more, that i just deleted........... :-)Sharmishtha Shenoy
November 12, 2015 - 14:04 Wow you are replaying my life here! Are you from India as well?Velantra
November 12, 2015 - 14:15 Nope........ a land far and beyond....... Hehehehe seven seas away, then you turn left, take a right turn and left and then you ask there for directions!!!!!Velantra
November 12, 2015 - 14:23 Just joking sharmishta, read my poem Ashamed.....maybe then you will understand....bodystringer
November 21, 2015 - 19:25 I like this. Reminds me of my younger days when I had no-one to lean on.Velantra
November 22, 2015 - 09:23 Thanks for your comment, same here, had to fight for myself with no-one to lean on.pies11
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